Cain's Fate

I was cold and cloth less,
But the sun stared at my weak body miserly.
I was hot and melting,
But the moon withheld It's cool bitterly.
I travelled alone in the dark,
But there was not one star to shimmer.
I tried to cross the river,
But it's torrents roared in anger.
Each time I bent to drink,
It became black, brackish, bubbling water.
When I came to the sea,
It rose and parted in hatred for me see.
Even the high hills,
Spared me no restoring views.
Valleys merged with desert,
Cuddle cats with tigers.
Greens at my back slashed.
They spoke the same thing,
Go back to your creator and it shall be well with thee.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 1:16 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Sands Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Feelings are well expressed and shown with this poem. Keep the faith Glory! :)
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