Caged

My home is not a home it's a cage. I am laying and waiting for people to come in and put the hook in my back and waiting for the attack. Sometimes I think it would be better if I died, there would be nobody standing around waiting to attack with the hook in my back. People put me in a cage with all mrage. I'm making a promise to god I will get out of my cage and stay away from people waiting to attack with there hook coming for my back. That is the cage I am in and one day I will be free
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June 12, 2016 at 12:17 AM
rebecca, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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December 8, 2014 at 11:46 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Rebecca - I choose your first deep, touching and well written free verse - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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December 7, 2014 at 7:00 PM
One day I will be free.. What a strong powerful write.. I really relate and connect with it. Thanks for sharing ~Joel (7)
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December 19, 2014 at 1:55 PM
So do your comments, feedbacks, or critiques, I love it all. I hope to come back to read some more of your writing, and hope you come back to read more of mine.
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December 7, 2014 at 11:00 PM
Thank you for your comment it means a lot
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