Caffeine - the Pleiades

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~Caffeine~ (Pleiades) Caffeine is in my whole body Coffee I can't live without it,it's my morning fix Can drink sometimes 2 to 4 cups of black coffee each day Cup cakes and coffee cakes are so delicious too Crunch crunch I even eat all the crumbs Cold coffee in a hot summer day is just yummy! yummy! Contented I sit enjoying my second cup of hot coffee with hazelnut cream. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2011 October.11.2015

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/11/2015 8:54:00 PM

I rarely drink coffee prefer tea but i love coffee cake:-) hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/16/2015 6:45:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Jan, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate it all so very much.So glad that you liked this one.Jan, I love tea too, but I drink coffee everyday more,the sweet deserts and all that, I just have them once in while:)Too much sugar n' all that is not really good or healthy everyday or all the time:) Now, I'll stop by your page very soon:)Thanks again for your visit, comments and all.Hugs!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:)D