Cafe Musings

Open eyed I stare at the simple setting 
waiting for the day to start,
the bread-baked scent of morning warms.
The grinder whirs and whirs,
beans fly, grounds brew, cream chills,
will you come?

Rose nails tap, finger wish to wrap
arms to bend as heart shaped chair backs
about the trunk of you, my Valentine.
Will you come?

Ah yes, you come, croissants in hand
reclaimed from the waiter, pull back my chair,
lay down a single rose. And we sit where love is wrought
encased in iron, all motions chaired by Cupid's bow.


2/2/14
Contest Café Musing
Poet Debbie Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Jones Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 8:24 AM
A great one Debbie....you sure brought all those small details to life.....congratulations on another win...
Maverick Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 3:02 AM
A very romantic piece here Debbie, I must complain to the kitchen though; there was a smell of burned toast I picked up at one point L O L)) keep well Joe..)
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 10:01 AM
Simply beautiful, picturesque.
Oyewole Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 6:11 AM
Great Work, poet Debbie Guzzi! Congrats on your fine win in the contest!!
Jerden Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 1:38 PM
Not just the setting, but the season as well. Great! You're thinking ahead. I, too agree that this is an early AM scene. Cheers, Roy
Mehta Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 8:06 AM
Lovely write on the café musings and congrats on the win, debbie
Mehta Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 8:02 AM
Lovely write on the café musings and congrats on the win, debbie
Hamilton Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 7:08 AM
good poem Debbie congrats on fine win hugs
Britt Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 11:49 PM
Debbie... Well done! Your words wrapped around me and held me there, at a little Parisian sidewalk cafe. Great read. Gratz! CTB
B Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 4:31 PM
This is a very powerful piece of poetry that captures the senses. You do a great job of intertwining the vivid imagery of a cafe setting and lovely smells with the theme of love.
Eggins Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 7:55 AM
Sigh I felt like I as eavesdropping this is written so well, lovely lovely poem 7 from me and fav'd thanks for your comment on my poem it was much appreciated love Jayne x
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 9:03 AM
Love it! I can see it...the cafe right in the middle of Five Points in Jacksonville, Florida...Happy Valentines Day! (Soon)
Kendrick Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 2:31 PM
Ahhh!! Reads like a latte' kind of day..I know that love is in the air..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
Mac Donald Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 11:55 AM
Sounds inviting, Debs! I can smell the coffee being ground, and the butttery croissants baking. NIce ambiance for a Valentine's Day brunch. Kiwi must know that I'm writing to you, she's squeaky barking her head off downstairs. She really had loved you, she doesn't always care for everyone. Keep well, love, Mikki
Rogers Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 4:17 PM
DG, a very lovely poem of anticipation, and expectations met! Love this piece,very nice , heart-frlt , romantic work!...Excellent//Sinclair
Macmillan Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 5:24 PM
Soupmail... all good, promise :)
Anish Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 12:14 PM
Good luck in the contest. I recently went to Israel and visited Yad Vashem and also saw the trees dedicated to the people who helped in saving people. I guess you were right when you said there are some good people out there. I used to sell radio time - business publications and other things. Now I work in a college - much more relaxing. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Melugin Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 9:26 AM
My dear Debbie, I'll come! The creative, expressive invitation is irresistible! Yes, I'll come, bringing 7 stars! My best, chuck
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 7:39 PM
This is fantastic, Debs. I love the romance in it. One of my favorites I have seen in this contest.
Williams Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 3:42 PM
Debbie very nice twist, I prefer tea though ha ha...David
Guzzi Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 9:17 PM
yes I should have added tea with the croissant
May Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 8:35 AM
I love how you made it into a valentine .."all motions chaired by Cupid's bow"...love it...
Pettit Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 10:24 PM
A continental breakfast could not be described poetically any better than this fine write.
Boskovski Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 10:04 PM
This is such a romantic poem full with such great imagery! An excellent Write Debbie, good luck in the contest! :) xoxo
Macmillan Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 4:22 PM
MMMMMM... lovely. Wonderful how you pulled it all together. Housekeeping: stare not star, bread-baked (hyphen), check for commas, ie. between iron and all... company left.. I am sad. My niece, only 14, seems so tough yet so fragile... I see her breaking... :( xox sad dee
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