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Cactus In Bloom

As Hedgehog-type cactus in bloom,
With claret-cup desert perfume;
Red-orange petals
On top of nettles-
I guard with my sharp, thorny, broom.

I'm hardy, resistant to clime
In weather where sunshine is prime.
Yet, still thrive in cold
When nightfalls unfold;
A mainstay for mundane, sublime.

My flower is tender and smooth
As velvety surfaces soothe.
My buds, I protect
With me, they connect-
And nurturing them, they improve.

Yet, thorns are my standby defense;
Protecting my blossoms- intense.
My keen spears await
To keep safe our fate-
And predators- anxious and tense!


July 9, 2020

Premiere Contest: The Flower, The Thorn, Or Both
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke
Theme: "You are the flower, the thorn, or both."
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 12:03 AM
Nicely done, Sandra, in limerick form towards its conclusion deserving to have won -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William
Watt Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 8:00 PM
Lovely personification of the cactus flower, Sandra. I live in a desert clime, so I see my share of cacti and their floral children, a stunning contrast of robust and ephemeral beauty which you captured so perfectly. Into my FAVs. Congratulations on your win, my friend. Blessings ~ John
Chiri Avatar
July 11, 2020 at 6:23 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
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