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Premiere Contest WinnerCabin In the Wood

The whoosh of the wild winter wind
wrapped me within swift swishing swirls
whipping me on till there it stood,
a lonely cabin in the wood.

The shrill shriek of the screech owl split 
the whoosh of the wild winter wind
and he swooped about the cabin,
stalking his prey with clever wit.

The cabin’s shutters banged about,
no shelter from the whistle or 
the whoosh of the wild winter wind,
and whined of the coming whiteout.

The burbling creek where graupels splat
babbled past the lonely cabin
as the birch creaked their welcome at
the whoosh of the wild winter wind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Etheridge Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 10:32 PM
Such a fun read. Thank you. Alliteration is wonderful.
Fowler Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 5:23 AM
I am glad you enjoyed this poem of mine. :)
Seeker Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 7:15 PM
Painting the picture so vividly with words ~ superb write and a well deserved trophy win too, I see. Enjoyed!
Fowler Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 5:14 AM
So many thanks for stopping by with such positive and encouraging words. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Linda
Agustin Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 12:43 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me experience vicariously winter in our "Winterless" country. God bless you.
Fowler Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 5:35 AM
Many thanks for your visit Beata, and thanks for the work you do! I'm glad you enjoyed this cold write. :) hugs, Linda
Kitchin Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:04 AM
Linda, a well done, captivating poem, congratulations on your first place win!
Fowler Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:18 AM
Many thanks for the visit and congrats Tania! I appreciate the positive comments. :) Linda
Gasun Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 5:28 AM
Wow! Congratulations on your well-deserved trophy win and this awesome write my dear friend! Thanks a lot for sharing! Blessings. Hugs
Fowler Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 5:56 AM
Hello Len. Many thanks for your kind and supportive words! And thanks for the congrats! Linda
Thacker Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 7:32 PM
Oh, wow. Congratulations on your win. Your poem was excellent!
Fowler Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 5:54 AM
Oh so many thanks for your visit and positive words Shane! I enjoyed your Piece of Me as well. :) Keep writing! Linda
Anaya Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 5:33 PM
Linda congratulations on your trophy win!!!! A perfect quatern and funtastic write. I am so happy for you! ~Anaya
Fowler Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 5:52 AM
Hi there Anaya. I'm always happy for your visits and supportive words. Thanks for the congrats! Linda
Hawley Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 4:43 PM
Good job on your win for this contest. I got very cold reading it.
Fowler Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 5:47 AM
Many thanks Miranda. A writer always likes to hear they evoke emotion with their words. :) I appreciate the visit and congrats! Linda
Harding Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 4:07 PM
Fantastic write, Linda. This style can be difficult to master but you nailed it!. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win! xoxo LyLy
Fowler Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 4:35 PM
Thanks LyLy! I appreciate the visit and congrats! Linda
Logan Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 3:36 PM
Top of list for your winning write, Linda, and congratulations for garnering the prize.
Fowler Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 4:00 PM
Many thanks for your congrats Jenna. So many terrific entries, I am quite honored. Linda
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 12:43 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful trophy win Linda. Emile chose well his winners. I love nature and your poem puts us in the center of it. Blessings xxoo
Fowler Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 1:57 PM
Thank you so much Connie. So many great competitors on this site, I'm honored to place among them. I'm thrilled for this top placement in Emile's contest! Linda
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July 30, 2022 at 12:36 PM
Congratulations on a top placement - This is excellent - I love it. God bless you, Love, Gina
Fowler Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 1:49 PM
Many thanks for stopping by with congrats Gina. Your Soul Limbs was lovely and I was captured by the last stanza. Thank you again! blessings and hugs to you, Linda
Hankins Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 11:43 AM
Congratulations, Linda, for your first place win in Emile's contest. I really liked your poem a lot, and I felt it was certainly worthy of this recognition.
Fowler Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 12:28 PM
Hey Milt. Thank you so much for the kind support and comments. There was so many great competitive works, I'm deeply flattered. You're Sounds of Summer was one of my choices for first. A close contest for Emile to judge I'm sure. Thanks again Milt, Linda
Pinet Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 11:07 AM
Congratulations Linda! Your poem "Cabin in the Wood" has placed "First" in my “Onomatopoeia PoetrySoup contest." This was a bit of fun, and your poem was entertaining and incorporated the onomatopoeia words well throughout your poem, well done my friend, Emile.
Fowler Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 12:24 PM
Hi Emile! I am honored and flattered that you found my humble work worthy of this honor! Thank you! Yes, it was fun and I enjoyed writing this piece for you. Again, my sincerest thank you for the honor and for sponsoring a fun and challenging contest. smiles, Linda
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July 12, 2022 at 11:57 PM
A marvelous contender for Emile's contest!
Fowler Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 8:44 AM
Many thanks Caren! Linda
Rhymer Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 7:41 AM
Loved your poem and also the form as well.How lovely the images of wind swept snow during this period of abominable heat.Thanks for the mental respite.
Fowler Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 10:28 AM
Many thanks Vickey. I appreciate your supportive comments! Linda
Wolf Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 5:52 PM
I am always amazed when anyone enters these contests -- and your entry is wonderful, to boot! (They are so hard for me to do). Bravo, Linda!
Fowler Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 4:37 AM
Thank you Gershon. I always appreciate your visits and comments! laf
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