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~ Christmas ~ (Senryu Suite) Christmas approaching family friends together bring in Christmas cheer Beaut'ful Christmas lights hanging from all Christmas trees such pretty colors Love family and friends decorations and good food presents galore too Family tog'ther happily they celebrate Jesus Christ was born. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014
December.06.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain ~ Author's Notes : The "Senryu" ( it is also called the human Haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese poetry form or style.

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Date: 12/8/2017 8:16:00 PM
Dorian, your Christmas thoughts well transcribed, ...................In senryu fashion well applied........................ Full of love, cheer, and joy, ................ A tribute to a very special birthday boy................. Christmas greeting to you and your kin....................... Your beautiful poetry keep writing!......... Mick
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Date: 12/7/2017 12:34:00 AM
Dear Dorian: Nicely done, this senryu string works well. Fitting prelude to the Christmas festive season. All the best to you and yours, Leon.
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