Connie Marcum Wong Poet Alliteration

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By the Water's Edge

By the Water's Edge

Georgia, with gilded glow imprinted in my mind.
Lake Lanier an island paradise divinely dwells
By the water's edge in haunting hue of cerulean blue
Where today we pledge vehement vows of love
In nature's pure pulchritude in transcendent twilight
Reflecting rich sunrays in your effervescent eyes.
My voice grows still in awe, amour awakened as time
Stands still, embracing embers of a sentient sunset.

4-11-19

~Poet of the Day April 13, 2019~
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Eve Roper April 24, 2019 at 8:37 PM Back with congratulations on your win! Hugs

Andrea Dietrich April 22, 2019 at 6:00 PM I see this gem got a POTD. BIG congrats, Connie, and thanks for visiting my poems recently. Hugs. Connie Marcum Wong April 24, 2019 at 4:22 PM Thank you Andrea. This was a surprise. xxoo

Carole Duet April 17, 2019 at 7:08 PM Beautiful Lake Lanier. I remember it well since I once owned a lot there. And, by its shores your love bloomed in your lovely poem, Connie. Connie Marcum Wong April 24, 2019 at 4:24 PM Thank you very much Carol. My twin sister lived in Georgia and I used to visit her when she lived there. xxoo

Constance La France April 15, 2019 at 8:24 AM Connie, beautifully penned, and a lovely image too and congratulations on POTD ~

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 15, 2019 at 7:07 AM Congratulations on POTD Lovely! xomo

Susan Ashley April 14, 2019 at 4:47 PM I especially love the first and last lines of your stunning poem, Connie, and was completely enchanted by all your glowing verses of beauty in between. A shining gem. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors, my lovely friend.. ~ Susan

John Gondolf April 14, 2019 at 5:16 AM Connie, you paint such a beautiful picture with your words. Congrats on POTD. John

Besma Riabi Dziri April 14, 2019 at 5:03 AM Enchanted by the scene.. fascinated by the flow of your sensitive poetry that impassion souls.. beyond words! Congratulations, Connie, on your POTD! An immense pleasure to read. Warmest wishes and blessings.

Eve Roper April 13, 2019 at 10:42 PM Back with congratulations on POTD.. Hugs

Brandy Nicole April 13, 2019 at 7:44 PM Such vivid images you paint with your words. A beautiful reflection of your heart. These moments. Congratulations Connie, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy

Heidi Sands April 13, 2019 at 6:28 PM Congratulations for this beautiful POTD Connie ! :)

Arturo Michael April 13, 2019 at 3:47 PM Georgia...You expressed it well...Congratulations Connie....

Jennifer Proxenos April 13, 2019 at 2:55 PM Hi Connie, a well deserved honor and POTD - for this poem is a true gem - Connie I am simply amazed when reading your poetry - your talent is transparent! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu April 13, 2019 at 2:22 PM Congratulations Connie, on your poem of the day...

Jan Allison April 13, 2019 at 1:59 PM many congrats on POTD Connie, what amazing imagery with such fabulous alliteration:-) hugs Jan xx

Edlynn Nau April 13, 2019 at 12:54 PM Just Lovely! I think alliteration is so much fun and takes a lot of work to carve it out just so. We were at the water’s edge with you, feeling the water creep over our toes and feeling the last rays of sunshine. Beautiful.

Charles Messina April 13, 2019 at 11:28 AM Absolutely beautiful, Connie. Congratulations on POTD...Charlie

Sunlite Wanter April 13, 2019 at 11:12 AM Good for you, Connie! Beautiful poetry as you do! Congratulations!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 13, 2019 at 9:45 AM Stunning write Connie! Congratulations on POTD.... the contest next ;) Have a splendid day! xomo

Joseph May April 13, 2019 at 8:17 AM Beautiful write Connie..Congrats on POTD..

Mike Gentile April 13, 2019 at 7:54 AM Connie, your line of transcendent twilight totally titillated my senses! The imagery is just splendid and so worthy of POTD. Congratulations xxoo

Warren Doll April 13, 2019 at 7:34 AM Wonderful write , Connie. I particularly like the last 2 lines. Congratulations on POTD! All the best~ Warren

Winged Warrior April 13, 2019 at 7:30 AM Superb write dear Connie...Congrats!!! on POTD!...and I'm sure it will place high in the contest...love & happy endings dear friend...^WW^...{*J*}

Charlie Smith April 13, 2019 at 6:21 AM wonderful entry Connie, congratulations for POTD honors...

Tania Kitchin April 13, 2019 at 5:28 AM Beautiful imagery! Congratulations on POTD!

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