By the Holy Fire

On those nights
I stood long in front of oceans 
Letting the waves crush violently 
Under my feet.

I used to wait 
For winds of words to come
And carry me
So I could breathe the smell of lakes
I would warm myself
By the holy fire
On islands' edges
Listening to chants of ancient people
Echoing from the depth of caves.

On those nights
The earth 
Was not enough for me.
I flew too far away
Carrying some dreams
With tired wings and
A few hopes.

I was still weak
When the storms 
Thundered in distance.

Decades later 
I realize how painful this voyage was.
But to stay 
Is more painful. 
For that 
I left my heart in the winds
Of words and dreams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Radhakrishna Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 3:55 AM
Khalid This is a gem! You must enter your poems in Poetry soup contests, to realise the full potential of your talent! I am impressed by your poem made of simple beautiful words that carve out a great image! That is what good poetry is about!
Albudoor Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 11:55 AM
I haven't thought of entering the contests here before. Thanks for your suggestion and your comments:)
Campbell  Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 5:37 AM
Beautiful
Albudoor Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 6:17 AM
Thans:)
Bangalee Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 12:03 AM
superb poem; love its warmth
Albudoor Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 6:17 AM
Thanks :)
Gist Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 6:26 PM
I can feel the warmth of salvation burning the imperfection off of my flesh. Indeed!
Albudoor Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 11:42 PM
Thank you:)
Gauthier Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 8:23 PM
Awesome. Powerful poem. Love it.
Albudoor Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 11:42 PM
Thank you line,
Timperley Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 6:22 AM
You are a dreamer and have captured the words that many fail to grasp. I have felt the smallness of standing on the shore with relentless waves and then look up and espy the vastness which makes me even smaller. Dream on my friend, and share more with us. God Bless.D.
Albudoor Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 9:58 AM
Thank you dear Dave, :))
Roberts Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 8:39 AM
And what a melody those words drifting in the wind carried. Touching write.
Albudoor Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 12:42 PM
Thank you dear Donna :)
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