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By Full Moon Light

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                                                            Moon
                                                           Golden
                                                        Nearly full
                                                 Touches Oak Trees
                                      In early night, brings lovers delight
                                  
                                     Brings Whip-Poor-Will romantic urges
                                               Fast, loud calls sends
                                                 Answered by hen
                                                           Funny 
                                                           Friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/20/2011 1:50:00 PM
Thought I'd read some of your older writes - I've finally got on here - it's been days! Lovely piece - I remember you explaining Whip-Poor-Will : )
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Date: 6/16/2011 6:03:00 AM
very much delightful Sara,... and funny,,, thanks for the smile,..p.d.
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Date: 6/15/2011 9:38:00 PM
answered by a hen. that is so cute! I like this, Sara!
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Date: 6/15/2011 8:00:00 PM
i can see the moon touching those oak trees, such a sight it is. such a beautiful piece you wrote Sara, just lovely. thank you for commenting on mr robin pays a visit. i lived in Iowa 34 years and Colorado 34 years, i have always seen Robins in the summer, it would be so strange not seeing any robins in the summer, where do you live that there is no robins in the summer time? if i may ask.
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Date: 6/15/2011 5:56:00 PM
Stunning entry with nice take on themne of the contest, Sara
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Date: 6/15/2011 1:33:00 PM
The imagery of the moon touching the oak trees with lovers sensing passion is beautiful, Sara. I had to chuckle thinking of the poor whipporwill getting a response from a hen. Very creative and truly a delight to read. Best wishes in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/15/2011 1:25:00 PM
Hey! Them poultries got romance too. Got a kick out of this one, Sara. Love, daver
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Date: 6/15/2011 1:14:00 PM
this is awesome, nice job!! cory
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Date: 6/15/2011 12:00:00 PM
We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Sara. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2011 6:34:00 AM
Striking imagery ... Good one ... Stal
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