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Buzzing and Boring

It was a beautiful summer day; I loved the sun on my back and neck. I was running down a field of flowers when I got a sharp pain in my left foot. I could hear the bumblebee before I saw him. He was fat and angry as he bored a large red stinging hole in my foot as I watched. Worse day ever. flowers love the bee my bare foot not so much buzzing and boring

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Date: 7/3/2022 9:39:00 AM
Never tangle with a bumble bee if you can help it.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/4/2022 12:40:00 AM
They are fierce
Date: 7/3/2022 3:26:00 AM
DAYS COME AND GO, WELL AND WOE- TRUE COMPANY; AS LIKE TOM AND JERRY !
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/4/2022 12:41:00 AM
Exactly right!

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