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lights swirl ... rhythms pound ... cold Duplais Verte emulsifies in my square glass tongue tingling, I swallow it in sips woody, bitter licorice plucks my senses the soft, dreamy warmth suffuses my blood, relaxing and the flamingos start to dance up-and-down, sweeping and bouncing timed with colored lasers and a mirror ball ... real?? then the buzzards join in, hopping spinning and jostling with the lovely pink birds glowing, dark, angular shapes I'm perplexed ... but hypnotized, I go with it my mind picturing a fantasy land of odd animals a steel drum paradise of music, green liqueur, and dancers sublime women with latte' skin and palm skirts twirling, shaking, kicking their legs tossing hips and limbs in sensual syncopation one special lady quite near to my table whose face I recognize, and movements captivate page-boy haircut and gold-flecked brown eyes peasant blouse, off-the-shoulders pleated, plaid mini and ruby-red Blahnik pumps that bring attention to the watercolor tattoos on her calves her left leg, chocolate turkey vultures and on the right, three gorgeous pink flamingos I finish my absinthe, smiling pick up another square glass of the Green Fairy and begin to sip ... cold, cloudy … smooth. ~ 4th Place ~ in the "Buzzards and Flamingos" Poetry Contest, Anthony Slausin, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 1/30/2019 8:06:00 AM
Aw, Awe~some. I revel in this one! Congratulations on your win Greg <3 xomo!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/2/2019 5:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen! :-)
Date: 1/30/2019 5:03:00 AM
I have come to expect the unique tangent you head off on with contest titles but this was quite a diversion! Congratulations,Greg. Best wishes Wendy
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2019 6:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Wendy, you are very sweet ... I let the Green Fairy guide me in this one, and with my child's imagination, (which some would call "immaturity"), it wasn't much of a stretch, lol. Blessings, my friend! ;-) <3
Date: 1/29/2019 9:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Gregory. Well penned.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2019 6:24:00 AM
Many kind thanks, Line - I appreciate it! :-) <3
Date: 1/27/2019 12:39:00 PM
Only you Greg would come up with tattoos on the calves buzzards and flamingos indeed!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2019 6:24:00 AM
Ha! Yup, I guess you're right, John ... you know me and my wild imagination, (some would just call it "starnge", lol). Blessings and thanks to you, my friend! :-)
Date: 1/27/2019 4:46:00 AM
Greg, excellent poem, captivating with great imagery, you should publish your poems if you haven't yet, you are a very talented writer and never cease to surprise and tantalize me with your words!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2019 6:23:00 AM
Oh, you're very kind to me, Tania, and I so appreciate the wonderful comments! I have NOT published as yet, but I'm contemplating it. I've only been doing this just over two years, so I feel a bit like a babe in the woods. It sure has been a blessing, though, as have the friendships I've made here, like yours! Blessings, Dear Poet Friend! :-) <3

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