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Butterfly So Free

Fluttering about light as a breath Flapping its colored whispers From honeysuckle to black-eyed susan At times hovering on a sun ray Not a care in the universe Dizzy with competing fragrances Intoxicated with the summer enchantment Freely roaming the gardens of Eden Flapping its coloured whispers Fluttering about light as a breath AP: 2nd place 2020 Submitted on November 4, 2017 for contest EARLY NOVEMBER STANDARD sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 11/9/2017 10:31:00 PM
This is beautiful and charming, Line - love it! Congrats on your win! :-) <3
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/10/2017 5:53:00 AM
Thanks, Gregory. Have an awesome weekend!
Date: 11/7/2017 4:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement. You really are inspired by butterflies I see.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/8/2017 3:21:00 PM
Thanks, Suzanne. Have a beautiful week!
Date: 11/4/2017 9:25:00 AM
This is very nice Line. Good luck in the contest. :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/4/2017 10:42:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi. I appreciate your visit. Have a great day!

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