Butterfly Collector

(N.b- I abhor anyone who kills for beauty and art- just thought I'd let you know in advance x)


Let me look at you-
Aquamarine, ultramarine, powder blue
like paper Angels jinking on thin string
lightning wingbeats make your colours sing
flitting, unconcerned, unbridled joy,
loved you, stalked you since I was a boy.
High on Lavender, bathing in the sun,
pastel shades beating lazy applause
joy cut short by me because....
I wanted you.
And now you're mine.
Here you are, ready to take flight
but you can't.
I've saved you, really.
Whatever out there comes to pass
can't touch you now- you're safe
beneath this glass
in stasis, beauty captured at a cost.
Life was lost
but... I too feel a sense of loss.
Can't quite pin it down.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Cornish Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 2:42 PM
Viv, special write and I can "pin it down" to exceptional thoughts - it's what a poet is born to do and you've done it here.
Puddifoot Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 2:58 PM
this is really a very good free verse poem - love "paper angels jinking on thin string" - and that closing line is so clever...I see you're relatively new to the site, so a belated welcome! if I ever get back to running contests I hope you'll consider entering with precisely this sort of poem; you have real talent :)
Wigley Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 12:52 AM
Thanks for your feedback,Charlotte, you're very kind. Everyone I've bumped into on this site has proved very inspirational. Love 'n hugs, Mister Viv x
Holmes Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 2:17 AM
Deep but entertaining Viv...N B ...".The Road Into Hoi An 2"...now written as requested!...many thanks for your appreciative words...love and peace..Peter
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