Butterflies

 (my mind hath looked 
upon the speaking face of earth and heaven
as her prime teacher......[Wordsworth])  

I saw two butterflies wrapped in silent passion,
Her heart-shaped wings splayed flat against the sill
Her torso throbbing in anticipation...
Himself, hovering gently to hold her still.
I saw their sleek brown bodies tightly pressed,
His feet clinging to her lest the wind 
Tear him away.  I saw the shadows rest
Around them and the midday sun descend,
And still they lay outside my window pane...
I wondered why it is that we must rush
And why my timid touches are but vain
And useless gestures, why he must always crush
The urgings. Nature’s children seem to know
That love is best when cherished soft and slow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guzzi Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 4:47 PM
Would you like to work on a Crown of Sonnets with us? read my blog please. Light & Love
Ruff Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 4:55 PM
I could try. I think I understand the rules. In other words, I wouldn't know what the first line of mine is to be until I see the last line of whoever is supposed to come before me?
Macmillan Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 9:37 AM
How lovely and the play with internal rhyme is so effective. The alliteration is wonderful. Much enjoyed. And the volta ... sigh, nice volta! Cheers!
Ruff Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 5:47 PM
Thank you so much. Alliteration could be said to be my trade mark, I suppose. I tend to fall into it even in prose.
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January 4, 2014 at 12:31 PM
lovely Karen...Just beautiful. Try for the contest..its to good to pass up. BG
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