Butcher's Knife

Butcher’s knife….

There is a nasty butcher who kills all his life.
All of us will be dead by that butcher’s knife.
He loves blood and demands worship day and night,
He promises that good will come in this strife.

He is making and then breaking with no shame.
We all know him, and we call him by his name.
I call him the butcher; he lives by himself,
He loves his knife and enjoys his vicious game.

A lot of us, we do what the butcher asks.
They kill for him as if they bond to his tasks.
They don’t know how to live; they see a bloody knife.
They walk as though they’re hiding behind masks.

What will be happening if the butcher dies?
I am so curious if somebody cries.
The sheep and all the cows will live without fear.
There will be no threats, no pain, no more lies.

Alas, my light of day turned into the night.
Little candle of my life is without light.
My pain is dark, and I'm confined in this room,
I will lose to the butcher without any fight. 


One of these days, he will cut my flesh and bone.
He will do that without making any moan.
Hope I will be alert and gaze into his eyes,
Tell him this flesh and bone I’ll surely disown.

3/2/2018 Haloo
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Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 5:40 PM
Who are you comparing the butcher to?
Salehi Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 2:04 AM
My friend you have to get the message by yourself, I am just the story teller...maybe you should read it one more time.
Horsman Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 5:52 PM
Wow, Amazing picture, and poetry, one so powerful.
Salehi Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Thanks Harry
Sathasivam Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 7:54 AM
Excellent. Thought provoking write. Beautiful painting. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Salehi Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 1:35 AM
Always, thank you my friend..
Allison Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 7:17 PM
thought provoking pieces both the poem and the painting. Do you write the poems first or paint the picture which inspires the poems. Love the butterflies which are always part of your work - these remind me of jigsaw pieces:-) hugs jan xx
Salehi Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 1:33 AM
Thanks my dear friend, some of these paintings are old and some are brand new. My style of painting is surrealism and I'm part of my painting as butterfly.... Thanks for being so supportive.
Hoffman Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 5:55 PM
An intriguing write Pashang; but I have to agree with July morning on this topic… God is love~1 John 4:8~Che :)
Salehi Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 1:35 AM
Absolutely .....
Williams Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 1:31 AM
What a beautiful painting Pashang. I must confess that I think of myself as a Spiritual person, not a follower of Man Made Religion. While people fear Death , I feel it is merely a transition into a new life. Your poem speaks volumes, thanks for sharing....Maria
Imtiaz Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 2:48 AM
hi Maria , lovely comment
Salehi Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 7:58 PM
My dear Maria, I'm with you 100%. Although, the transition to the new level of existence is eminent, I am hoping that it will be better. ....Always Pashang
Kendrick Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 4:35 PM
Interesting work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Salehi Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Thanks.
Maverick Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 1:48 PM
A dramatic piece from you here Pashang, a bit to think on.' I sent you soupmail quite a while ago, have you checked your mail by any chance?
Salehi Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Hi Joe, I answered your email my friend. Thanks
Wigley Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 8:45 PM
A tricky form but you weave it well, Pashang. Regards, Viv
Salehi Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 11:25 AM
Hello my friend, Rubayiat is always tricky.... Thank you very much.
Bateman Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 7:16 AM
Hello Pashang, This is a superbly crafted and creative poem in every respect. At first blush, I notice from your various poems, a distinct mastery of the Rubaiyat format, of course, among many others. (I plan to incorporate using this format for some of my future-planned themes.) Your words and verses captivated me through all six of your stanzas. Your last verse certainly sends the reader a very clear message. Outstanding Work!! Cheers and Best Wishes Gary
Salehi Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 10:24 AM
Thank you Gary, you're very kind. I love to read your Rubayi or Rubayiat. Now,there is a better explanation of this ancient form of poetry on P.S website. Please remind me when you have done Rubayi. Once again thank you for reading my work.... Cheers, all the best.
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 12:34 AM
- Your talents are impressive, Pashang - Both in picture and words - An interesting writing, well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Salehi Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 1:41 AM
You are so kind my dear Anne Lise.... Thanks.
Raven Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 9:15 PM
Hi Pashang, such a deep, creative write. The content of this work says much on your subject. My life is such that i may well laugh in the face of death and let this life end. Maybe i am always ready for the great adventure that lies ahead. I always admire your talent but especially in this piece. Hugs....Mike. XX
Salehi Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 11:57 PM
Mike you are a great friend, and thank you for the compliment. I studied and taught science my better part of my life and I know for the fact that your atoms and mine are about 14 billion years old and perhaps the great adventure is in the next 14 billion years. Thanks Mike...
Murray Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 7:01 PM
I wish I could be as brave as you Pashang.
Salehi Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 11:48 PM
LOL...... You are magnificent.
One Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 10:23 AM
Powerful poem, it is the ignorance of religion that causes death... Well expressed..
Salehi Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 2:12 PM
Thanks my friend, as I wrote for Eileen I have no quarrel with God. I cannot verify or falsify his existence. I get comfort that he is there... but religion ..... If I see you we can discuss this in length. Thanks for your comment.
Manassian Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 2:17 AM
Interesting poem which leaves one feeling....uneasy. Your painting speaks volumes. Although there is a lot of death caused by religion...it need not be so. Thanks for your kind visit to my work.
Salehi Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 1:58 PM
Don't be uneasy my dear friend, I have no problem with God. Although, if I see him, I'll question him.... Religions on the other hand are the problems
May Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 7:31 PM
A deep and dark poem Pashang...Very creative
Salehi Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 11:26 PM
Deep...maybe...dark...is not...creative, thank you.
Callus Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:52 AM
You capably merge two talents into a lovely meaningful offering, Pashang. Death knows no pity or remorse, but after all it's just a necessary step that leads us to a new and better life. Regards // paul
Salehi Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 1:18 PM
Thanks Paul, you're too kind. I agree with Death has no remorse, but leading to a better life... I will let you know...
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:30 AM
I agree with Vijay, your poem and painting speak volumes. I really hope you don't actually feel the same way, however, as the person in the poem. I believe most souls will find themselves in a good place when they pass on!
Salehi Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 1:14 PM
Thanks Andrea, I don't know about my soul, but I know there is a scientific law that states, " nothing can be created and nothing can be destroyed. The total energy/ matter exist before and after".... So, I'm not worried....
Pandit Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 5:35 AM
Your painting speaks volumes..so does your poem..well done, Pashang. Great imagination and talent!
Salehi Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 1:09 PM
Thanks Vijay, I'm done with lying...
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