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Busy Men,Idle Sun

busy men,scatter like travel of pain, through every road;every nerve end. they push me;push through my rays. walk pass me,afraid to lend a gaze, alone,frustrated,pouring out my heat waves, i watch as they forget i need them. busy men,walking back-straight back, through same roads-same or different cars glad that i am leaving,to natures' park. they walk pass me without regards, talk less about on weather forcast. heading home,alone. someone is an island after all. will somebody be kind enough, to sit and watch? busy men will never see the beauty of a sunrise. busy men-will never see the beauty of anything in life.

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Date: 8/17/2013 10:55:00 PM
HI ALUMBUGU, CONGRATULATIONS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/17/2013 10:03:00 PM
Alumbugu. Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* Linda
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Date: 8/15/2013 9:06:00 AM
aw so true "busy men will never see the beauty of a sunrise. busy men-will never see the beauty of anything in life." Yes its true you can feel very alone in a crowd of people. Thats why I love nature and animals! Well done. Congrats on your great featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 8/13/2013 7:11:00 PM
I loved this poem! How often have I ventured out into this world only to feel invisible in a crowd. Yet my greatest company has been the beauty of nature.
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