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Your face, divinely wrapped with soft little bows that beckon Plump, dew-dappled raspberries that purse the perfect pout Cutely tapered chili peppers plucked in rain from love's intent As your eyes close, I gently tug under your chin toward mine Stray strands of your herbal tresses fall sweetly between us As your succulent lips part to reveal a pulpy pink prize within Oh such a savory press of mouths to pique passion's motive Gods themselves would spend a moon's age imbibing ... so shall I! ~ 5th Place ~ in the "Kissing Contest" Poetry Contest, Bobby May, Judge & Sponsor. * Merry Christmas! *

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Eve Roper

Date: 12/26/2019 2:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your very passionate descriptive win! Hugs Eve

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/28/2019 8:59:00 PM

Many kind thanks, Eve, I greatly appreciate the kind comments, my friend! :o) <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/25/2019 1:25:00 PM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Gregory :) - hugs and Marry Christmas // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/28/2019 8:58:00 PM

That's very kind of you, Anne-Lise - thanks so very much! :o) <3

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/25/2019 10:06:00 AM

This is really sexy. Great creative descriptions!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/28/2019 8:58:00 PM

Thank you very much, Juliet, I'm so pleased you liked this one! :o) <3

Brenda Chiri

Date: 12/24/2019 6:07:00 PM

Crew this was so beautifully written congrats on the placement! I would have thought it would place much higher!;)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/28/2019 8:57:00 PM

Oh, that's very kind of you, Brenda, and I thank you very much! :o) <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2019 5:54:00 PM

FANTASTIC one, Greg!!!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/28/2019 8:57:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! :o) <3

Bobby May

Date: 12/24/2019 3:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/24/2019 3:04:00 PM

Thank you very much for my placement.

Charles Messina

Date: 12/24/2019 1:25:00 PM

Killer poem, killer lips too (lol) Great write, Greg. Best wishes for a win. Happy Holidays to you and your family. You are in my thoughts my friend. Blessings Charlie

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/24/2019 3:14:00 PM

(2) I work so hard to put MORE into each word and phrase, to not have ANY cliche's or typicals, to write my very best on another level, yet I'm doing worse than when I was first here. I'm grateful for your kind words and many others, but I'm missing something. Back to music full-time I think. Happy Holidays, My Poet Brother.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/24/2019 3:13:00 PM

Thanks so much, Charlie - 31 out of 35 ... I'm doing my best work and going backwards quickly. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Not sure how much longer I'll be here, my friend ... so many good friends I'd miss like you, but this year has been horrid with health and losing my dad, and the discouragement is dragging me down.