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Bus Stop Heaven

The first time I laid eyes on beautiful him I was on my way to work only fifteen years of age sober with a heart that longed to be taken Each morning I said hello my tongue glued and my eyes gelled. I knew he had it bad when he let the bus go by and waited for me. that smile could melt the sun and bring it back again, and again. Forty five years later still married to my one and only glove fit man he brings me flowers from the garden every day. He's my Sun-ray.

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Date: 6/27/2018 7:38:00 PM
Beautiful and blanketed with smitten love and lasting forty-five years. Mine, has been 38. .. Congratulations on your win, Pixie, Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/26/2018 12:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely love story told in 7 lines. Well done! :)
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Date: 6/25/2018 7:14:00 PM
'Sun-ray' - Perfect!! Congrats on your win in the contest too. ~ gershon
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Date: 6/25/2018 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Pixie :)
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Date: 6/25/2018 7:14:00 AM
45 years wow... thats excellent.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 6/25/2018 6:57:00 AM
Back with congrats Pixie on your well earned win..keep creating your special work of art.
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Date: 6/23/2018 4:58:00 PM
A beautiful and delightful free verse Pixie.. So amazing to have forty five years together! Many more years! Blessings to you..
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Date: 6/23/2018 2:44:00 PM
Those who live by love and for love have our Lords blessing! May I wish you both another forty-five years of happiness dear, Pixie! God be with you! Enchanting writing!
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Date: 6/23/2018 7:34:00 AM
Adorable, Pixie. Well done.
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Date: 6/23/2018 6:04:00 AM
Love flows in every romantic word..from the first encounter till a long.. forty five years later..how wonderful to be together for a lifetime..beautiful depiction..wish you a BIG win, Pixie.
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