Bus Ride

I glance at my watch,
Shake my head at the hands,
And count silver cars
While I patiently stand.
Three minutes, Five minutes,
Ten minutes late.
Time ticks away,
And still I must wait.

Traffic flows by
Like an ocean of steel,
Pausing at times -
Liquid automobiles.
I laugh to myself:
Who would have presumed?
Environmentalists
Forced to inhale the fumes!

It comes into view:
The great whale of this sea.
It sprays its exhaust -
Remorseless, it seems. 
An eager step forth -
But its presence misleads.
My sigh is a cloud.
"Out of service," it reads.

Minutes tick by,
Till its cousin arrives
And opens its doors
To admit our grim line.
We pack ourselves in,
Like sardines in a can.
No free seat in sight -
So we awkwardly stand.

By the time I can see
My stop up ahead,
I'm an hour behind
And my feet feel like lead.
I push my way off,
As if freed from a jail.
Now I know Ahab's pain -
To be wronged by a whale.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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October 13, 2013 at 1:37 AM
heather... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. goodnight. <3 =LINDA=
Austin Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 11:14 AM
Brings back those big-city days, waiting for a trolley - the counting white walls. Good stuff. Congrats on the selection. daver
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 2:31 PM
oh, dang, my soupmail has been emptied!!! What?? ?And I can't access it either. ARE you able to ? I was just gonna tell you the judge of that contest poem you mentioned today did not like my poem much because I did not make the list and I don't understand her reasoning (II did not have any errors in it) but thanks for visiting it. Luv, Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 2:27 PM
haha, just remembering this one from last time I saw it. ummm, soupmail.
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 9:19 AM
haha, this could be called Riding the Whale or something!! Can't believe I found this oldie of yours that was new to me. It's cute and would work well in a contest about pet peeves!
Horsman Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 3:48 PM
love this Heather just trawling in your oldies,, also can relate to the poem.. and it's visual aspects..
Hunter Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 7:31 AM
Ha...entertaining write...there's not a bus within 80 miles of me...love that ending, Heather!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 12:56 PM
This is very good. I feel your pain, I am not a very happy or patient waiter when it comes to buses planes or ferries.
Ellison Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 10:18 PM
Thanks for sharing my friend... really enjoyed reading it! Hugs, Jack xox
Hillmer Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 4:22 PM
This has a very nice flow to it. I really enjoyed the humor here. Great piece of writing indeed.
Ober Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 6:20 AM
Thanks, Melanie!
Poet Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 1:25 AM
Good poem with nice flow.All can relate to it.Enjoyed the read.
Ober Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 6:20 AM
Thank you, Kash!
Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 3:26 PM
By you a car Heather,the bus are always to late.Like yours poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Ober Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 6:21 AM
A car would be nice ;)
Davis  Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 10:45 AM
Love this! :)
Ober Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 6:21 AM
Thanks :)
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