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Burst of Spring

icicles melting old thoughts disappearing for the burst of spring Heidi Sands 3/6/22

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Date: 4/5/2022 1:30:00 PM
"old thoughts disappearing" - this was nicely penned!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/5/2022 2:07:00 PM
I appreciate your kind feedback. Thank you :)
Date: 3/9/2022 5:36:00 PM
An incredible story with a few words. Enjoyed. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 3/10/2022 5:56:00 AM
Thank you Debra. Blessings :)
Date: 3/9/2022 11:36:00 AM
- A wonderful time, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/9/2022 11:38:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I hope all is well. Hugs :)
Date: 3/9/2022 8:39:00 AM
Yep, I'm ready! Excellent imagery!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/9/2022 10:22:00 AM
Me too Joe! Thank you :)
Date: 3/8/2022 5:47:00 PM
Hi! Heidi, yes, saying good-bye to winter, I can't say that I'll miss it. Bring! on Spring. I enjoyed your poem. Blessings ~ Debra
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/9/2022 4:28:00 AM
Thank you Debra :)
Date: 3/8/2022 7:35:00 AM
love where you're coming from with this one
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/8/2022 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Jack :)
Date: 3/8/2022 1:05:00 AM
Beautiful haiku....! Love the line 'old thoughts disappearing'. It suggests a lot ! Have a great week Heidi !
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Date: 3/8/2022 4:46:00 AM
Thank you Valsa :)
Date: 3/7/2022 1:48:00 PM
Oh Gosh, my heart leapt with your words Heidi! Wonderful, so joyful! <3 ~BJ
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/7/2022 2:36:00 PM
So nice to hear BJ. Thank you :)
Date: 3/7/2022 10:38:00 AM
May your Spring thoughts be filled with love and positivity! A lovely haiku! Happy Monday xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/7/2022 12:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Mike! I appreciate your kind words. I hope all is well. Happy Monday! xxoo :)
Date: 3/7/2022 7:02:00 AM
Springs brings renewal, and so does you poem, Heidi; old thoughts and icicles both know that it's time for them to melt into oblivion. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/7/2022 10:27:00 AM
Thank you Paul. That's true, time to melt into oblivion for sure. I hope all is well. :)
Date: 3/6/2022 7:44:00 PM
Yes! May it come with a burst. Melt, o ye ice, and blossom, o ye flowers! Sigh. Thanks, Heidi. :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/7/2022 5:43:00 AM
Yes. Thank you Gershon. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 3/6/2022 4:24:00 PM
Spring will burst into bloom!, Lovely write Heidi
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Date: 3/6/2022 7:21:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. Let's hope soon! :)
Date: 3/6/2022 9:22:00 AM
Hi Heidi, You penned such a well-written write about my favorite season very well,in your Spring haiku. I enjoyed the read. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/6/2022 11:19:00 AM
Thank you very much Alexis. I am happy you enjoyed this. I hope you have a nice day too :)
Date: 3/6/2022 9:20:00 AM
Always an inspiration in vibrancy of spring. Enjoyed the tenor of your write, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/6/2022 11:18:00 AM
Thank you for all your support Vijay. I appreciate it very much. I hope your day is going well :)

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