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Burst of Spring

icicles melting
        old thoughts disappearing
             for the burst of spring

Heidi Sands

3/6/22

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/5/2022 1:30:00 PM

"old thoughts disappearing" - this was nicely penned!

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/5/2022 2:07:00 PM

I appreciate your kind feedback. Thank you :)

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/9/2022 5:36:00 PM

An incredible story with a few words. Enjoyed. Blessings ~ Debra

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/10/2022 5:56:00 AM

Thank you Debra. Blessings :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2022 11:36:00 AM

- A wonderful time, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/9/2022 11:38:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. I hope all is well. Hugs :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/9/2022 8:39:00 AM

Yep, I'm ready! Excellent imagery!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/9/2022 10:22:00 AM

Me too Joe! Thank you :)

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/8/2022 5:47:00 PM

Hi! Heidi, yes, saying good-bye to winter, I can't say that I'll miss it. Bring! on Spring. I enjoyed your poem. Blessings ~ Debra

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/9/2022 4:28:00 AM

Thank you Debra :)

Jack Horne

Date: 3/8/2022 7:35:00 AM

love where you're coming from with this one

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/8/2022 7:41:00 AM

Thank you Jack :)

Valsa George

Date: 3/8/2022 1:05:00 AM

Beautiful haiku....! Love the line 'old thoughts disappearing'. It suggests a lot ! Have a great week Heidi !

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/8/2022 4:46:00 AM

Thank you Valsa :)

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/7/2022 1:48:00 PM

Oh Gosh, my heart leapt with your words Heidi! Wonderful, so joyful! <3 ~BJ

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/7/2022 2:36:00 PM

So nice to hear BJ. Thank you :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/7/2022 10:38:00 AM

May your Spring thoughts be filled with love and positivity! A lovely haiku! Happy Monday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/7/2022 12:08:00 PM

Thank you so much Mike! I appreciate your kind words. I hope all is well. Happy Monday! xxoo :)

Paul Callus

Date: 3/7/2022 7:02:00 AM

Springs brings renewal, and so does you poem, Heidi; old thoughts and icicles both know that it's time for them to melt into oblivion. ~ Warm regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/7/2022 10:27:00 AM

Thank you Paul. That's true, time to melt into oblivion for sure. I hope all is well. :)