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Burning Balance

Sing standing atop this rolling blue ball
little that we ever hear stays the same.
Spirits of life sound in the wind for all
there is no one else to ignite this flame.

Earth connects with each single living thing
deep within dwells the soylent shaft to strive.
So this truth can universally ring,
sing its song out loudly and feel alive.

Sense our world's center core, pent-up, stone heat;
when will it irrupt, we cannot be sure -
piercing through the crust down below our feet.
By our letting go, we shall all endure.

Learn the turnings of spirit globally
be the balance to be forever free.



108 words 14 lines  Sonnet 2/7/23
Tribute to "Spirit of Life", Unitarian hymn.
References made to Buddhist principles of
"oneness", "letting go" and "impermanence"
in the text. Mention of the phrase "Soylent 
Shaft" refers to the 1973 movie Soylent Green.
Illustration in colored pencil by G. Gaul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Radice Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 6:08 AM
Greg, I love this. I'm surprised it hasn't had more comments. That said, I'm late to the party with congratulations. I love your illustrations too. Cheers - Gary
Fowler Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 10:43 AM
Congratulations on your excellent win Greg! :)
Gaul Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 11:07 AM
Thanks ever so. Your visit is most appreciated.
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