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Sing standing atop this rolling blue ball little that we ever hear stays the same. Spirits of life sound in the wind for all there is no one else to ignite this flame. Earth connects with each single living thing deep within dwells the soylent shaft to strive. So this truth can universally ring, sing its song out loudly and feel alive. Sense our world's center core, pent-up, stone heat; when will it irrupt, we cannot be sure - piercing through the crust down below our feet. By letting go, we shall all endure. Learn the turnings of spirit globally be the balance to be forever free. 107 words 14 lines Sonnet 2/7/23 Tribute to "Spirit of Life", Unitarian hymn. References made to Buddhist principles of "oneness", "letting go" and "impermanence" in the text. Mention of the phrase "Soylent Shaft" refers to the 1973 movie Soylent Green. Illustration in colored pencil by G. Gaul

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Date: 3/25/2023 6:08:00 AM
Greg, I love this. I'm surprised it hasn't had more comments. That said, I'm late to the party with congratulations. I love your illustrations too. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 2/14/2023 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent win Greg! :)
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Greg Gaul
Date: 2/14/2023 11:07:00 AM
Thanks ever so. Your visit is most appreciated.

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