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Burlesque

My naive picture of Burlesque Some lovely ladies junoesque Slapstick humor risky Dancers rather frisky. Mom would consider it grotesque. For Miranda's contest won an hm

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Elaine George

Date: 4/16/2011 11:03:00 AM

Funny Limerick, Joyce. Many congrats on your win. Love, Lainie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/13/2011 3:28:00 PM

Good idea..Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/13/2011 5:41:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Joyce in the contest "Burlesque Boutique" sponsored by Miranda Lambert. Love, Carol

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/13/2011 3:47:00 AM

Many Congratulations Joyce on your HM in this Burlesque Boutique contest.Nice write.Love, Gautami

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2011 11:24:00 PM

Hi, Joyce, and congrats here on your HM.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/12/2011 5:16:00 PM

Yes she would! My Mom too would NEVER have permited the doing OR the seeing LOL Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

John Freeman

Date: 4/12/2011 4:50:00 PM

Congrats. on your HM success. Joyce. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 4/12/2011 1:13:00 PM

Many congratulations Joyce on your win in Randa's contest ....:) smiles 4 U

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/12/2011 9:41:00 AM

Congrats Joyce on your HM in the Burlesque contest with this fantastic write my friend.. enjoy your very special honor with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/12/2011 9:19:00 AM

Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Joyce

Jack Horne

Date: 4/12/2011 8:36:00 AM

lLOL Many congrats : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/18/2011 5:07:00 PM

Cool and clever entry Joyce..wonderful rhyme my friend.. good luck in the contest... nice view of the burlesque scene..luv..happy weekend my friend...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/17/2011 3:17:00 PM

I'll send it in an email! ;)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/17/2011 2:37:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this cute one..You thought up one that reads like a winner...Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I placed in the contest..I posted a new blog..Sara

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 3/17/2011 10:02:00 AM

this is an excellent piece

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/17/2011 8:14:00 AM

This is great, Joyce! My mom would have considered burlesque very inappropriate. I'm glad you supported Randa's contest and wish you success. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 3/17/2011 8:07:00 AM

Congratulations on all your wins : ) Jack

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/17/2011 7:08:00 AM

LOL yes me too/ I think of the 3 stooges? Thanks for your nice comment IF you feel like working maybe we can try to reduce the # of words in my sestina When Madness Rides on Moonlight? Wanta play? Thanks so much for your sweet comment on Errant Knight! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/16/2011 10:43:00 PM

This is excellent, JOyce. What better way could you have employeed rhyme with Burlesque than in THIS limerick!

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/16/2011 7:20:00 PM

Funny verse, I enjoyed the laugh. Good luck in the contest. Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/16/2011 4:58:00 PM

Beautiful images creating a humorous picture, Joyce