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Burlesque

My naive picture of Burlesque
Some lovely ladies junoesque
Slapstick humor risky
Dancers rather frisky.
Mom would consider it grotesque.

For Miranda's contest

won an hm

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Elaine George

April 16, 2011 at 11:03 AM

Funny Limerick, Joyce. Many congrats on your win. Love, Lainie

Sara Kendrick

April 13, 2011 at 3:28 PM

Good idea..Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 13, 2011 at 5:41 AM

Congratulations for your win Joyce in the contest "Burlesque Boutique" sponsored by Miranda Lambert. Love, Carol

Gautami Phookan

April 13, 2011 at 3:47 AM

Many Congratulations Joyce on your HM in this Burlesque Boutique contest.Nice write.Love, Gautami

Andrea Dietrich

April 12, 2011 at 11:24 PM

Hi, Joyce, and congrats here on your HM.

Debbie Guzzi

April 12, 2011 at 5:16 PM

Yes she would! My Mom too would NEVER have permited the doing OR the seeing LOL Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

John Freeman

April 12, 2011 at 4:50 PM

Congrats. on your HM success. Joyce. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

April 12, 2011 at 1:13 PM

Many congratulations Joyce on your win in Randa's contest ....:) smiles 4 U

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 12, 2011 at 9:41 AM

Congrats Joyce on your HM in the Burlesque contest with this fantastic write my friend.. enjoy your very special honor with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 12, 2011 at 9:19 AM

Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Joyce

Jack Horne

April 12, 2011 at 8:36 AM

lLOL Many congrats : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 18, 2011 at 5:07 PM

Cool and clever entry Joyce..wonderful rhyme my friend.. good luck in the contest... nice view of the burlesque scene..luv..happy weekend my friend...

Debbie Guzzi

March 17, 2011 at 3:17 PM

I'll send it in an email! ;)

Sara Kendrick

March 17, 2011 at 2:37 PM

Good luck in the contest with this cute one..You thought up one that reads like a winner...Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I placed in the contest..I posted a new blog..Sara

Honesty Oimbo

March 17, 2011 at 10:02 AM

this is an excellent piece

Carolyn Devonshire

March 17, 2011 at 8:14 AM

This is great, Joyce! My mom would have considered burlesque very inappropriate. I'm glad you supported Randa's contest and wish you success. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

March 17, 2011 at 8:07 AM

Congratulations on all your wins : ) Jack

Debbie Guzzi

March 17, 2011 at 7:08 AM

LOL yes me too/ I think of the 3 stooges? Thanks for your nice comment IF you feel like working maybe we can try to reduce the # of words in my sestina When Madness Rides on Moonlight? Wanta play? Thanks so much for your sweet comment on Errant Knight! Light & Love