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on ship’s voyage cosmos-deep
          a captain’s life was laid to sleep
               wrapped in linen mummy-style
     and thrown into the stellar keep

he floated on in endless black
          ‘tween the stars and ev’ry lack
               old, as much the void he swam
     ‘cross a vault of night and back

what of life had this one known
          had he thrived or barely grown
               was he one of true love’s shills
     cold as now so lost and lone

years spun into thousands more
          through galactic breadths he tore
               darkened matter - cosmic dusts
     bound for some unceasing shore

what would e’er become of this
          a spacer shorn of life’s dear kiss
               drifting through the sea of suns
     unto the breach of time’s abyss

might he, in some age from now
          be set back to breath somehow
               by the brain of some grand race
     advanced with tech to thus allow

oh should he end up on that path
          what wonders will his being hath
               to sail those stars and live again …
     no greater last of all, that laugh!







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Date: 7/6/2025 12:33:00 PM
Creative and good imagination in this one. The flow, rhyme and rhythm are good. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 5/28/2025 9:47:00 PM
I sensed the mysterious overtones in your poem. I like the philosophical words regarding an afterlife. Nicely done.
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Date: 5/25/2025 3:57:00 AM
What thoughts drifted in your head to prompt this I can’t fathom but you made space an abysmal grave with hope of new life. Well done!
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