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Burgundy Taffeta

As death embraced my whole being
Shrouded in burgundy taffeta
Her arms forceful
Embraced me
So as we spooned
I could not turn to see her lace shrouded
Face

She whispered
In Victorian tongue
Just loud enough to menace
Yet no matter how intensely I listened
Not one word
Made
Sense

I tried to respond
Or scream
Or raise
But my living soul stood still and silent
We swooned
Noir skies
Still
Laid out
And wrestled silent screams
And finally she softened her hold
And allowed me to leave
Our dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 6:50 PM
It's so surreal and dreamy. I really like it!
Deeks Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 12:17 AM
thanks andrea it was one of those dreams i just wanted to escape from.. karen
Kendrick Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 2:23 PM
Unusual work with a surprise ending that made the work very interesting..Sara
Deeks Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 12:17 AM
thank you lots sara... karen
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