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Burden of Proof

Sat in the pub his cellphone chirped, one text showed as unread, 'Where are you?' read the message, 'in the pub' his reply said. 'You're not, you're seeing someone else, her place or in your car, so send me a selfie picture now to prove just where you are'. He duly did, inside the bar, surrounded by his mates, she checked the metadata in the shot for time and date. This routine became habit, not just one or two times more him trying to have fun, she sat at home, so insecure. One day she sent her text as usual, knowing where he'd be he answered 'with another girl, be home by half past three' 'Oh, very funny', she replied ' you've made your point, I know that I should trust you so don't send me any more photos'. He read that text and smiled, then swung his legs over the bed, his mistress sat beside him, placed a kiss on his forehead. ' You're clever, one reason why I love you so many ways' 'I know that,' she said, ' but didn't I say honesty pays?'

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Date: 3/14/2018 6:10:00 AM
An all to familiar picture that you have painted well. Glad you are still posting and enjoying playing with words. Have a great week. Regards David
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Date: 3/12/2018 2:32:00 PM
A very pleasant read, Viv. I don't have much patience for jealous people but this is quite a peculiar situation. LOL
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/13/2018 1:51:00 AM
Let's hope this kid of surveillance never takes off, eh? x
Date: 3/12/2018 9:19:00 AM
fabulous twist at the end Mr Viv, sadly this scenario of insecurity does ring so true and often drives the partner to be unfaithful:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/13/2018 1:52:00 AM
Indeedy, Jan. From previous experiences I know there's only so many ways and times you can say you love someone before it loses it's value. Viciious circle x
Date: 3/12/2018 7:33:00 AM
hahaha... what a twist!!!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/13/2018 1:53:00 AM
I'm sure it has happened somewhere, Silent. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 3/12/2018 6:28:00 AM
Well, you can see how someone can be encouraged to fulfill another's fear...Nice...I enjoyed it...All the best Viv
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/13/2018 1:53:00 AM
Yes, Arturo, a catch 22 situation. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 3/12/2018 4:11:00 AM
Great one Viv, you're giving us menfolk ideas lol.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/13/2018 1:53:00 AM
Sell your phone, Tom, you Lothario :)

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