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Bullseye

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bullseye wink, Valentine his smile aims ooh la la vanilla sweet and arrow straight broad wings and handsome halo thump thump breathe i bat eyelashes, twirl my hair a swooshing of his pulse all butterflies bullseye 2/12/2022 Give me a Rictameter! Sponsor: M L Kiser HMS

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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 2/17/2022 11:55:00 AM
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Congratulations!! I love your choice of sensory language because it makes your poem beautiful and alluring. Very nice!! Much love...Meghan
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Valsa George
Date: 2/15/2022 10:16:00 PM
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Hi Kim, very ingeniously crafted ! Love the image and the poem !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2022 9:57:00 AM
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Thank you, Valsa!
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Bill Baker
Date: 2/13/2022 11:02:00 AM
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Loved the image and the poem, Kim. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2022 9:57:00 AM
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Thank you, Bill!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2022 5:22:00 AM
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Lovely poem and lovely design, Kim. I hear the pulse...butterflies.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2022 6:09:00 AM
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Thank you, dear friend!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/13/2022 3:00:00 AM
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Oh I love this Kim. I can’t stop smiling. Thank you for sending me to sleep with a joyous heart. Blessings xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2022 6:09:00 AM
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Blessings to you too! I’m smiling because you’re smiling :)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/12/2022 10:18:00 PM
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A sweet tale of hearts aflutter! Imagery rich and lovely. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2022 6:09:00 AM
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Thank you, sweet poet!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/12/2022 8:52:00 PM
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A great description of that feeling of butterflies when you meet that special one, wonderful entry for the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2022 9:17:00 PM
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Thank you, Michelle!

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