Kim Rodrigues Poet Rictameter

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Bullseye

bullseye
         wink, Valentine
      his smile aims ooh la la 
   vanilla sweet and arrow straight
broad wings and handsome halo   thump thump breathe
   i bat eyelashes, twirl my hair
      a swooshing of his pulse
         all butterflies
bullseye

2/12/2022
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Meghan Hutchings February 17, 2022 at 11:55 AM Congratulations!! I love your choice of sensory language because it makes your poem beautiful and alluring. Very nice!! Much love...Meghan

Valsa George February 15, 2022 at 10:16 PM Hi Kim, very ingeniously crafted ! Love the image and the poem ! Kim Rodrigues February 16, 2022 at 9:57 AM Thank you, Valsa!

Bill Baker February 13, 2022 at 11:02 AM Loved the image and the poem, Kim. Bill Kim Rodrigues February 16, 2022 at 9:57 AM Thank you, Bill!

Vijay Pandit February 13, 2022 at 5:22 AM Lovely poem and lovely design, Kim. I hear the pulse...butterflies. Kim Rodrigues February 13, 2022 at 6:09 AM Thank you, dear friend!

Connie Marcum Wong February 13, 2022 at 3:00 AM Oh I love this Kim. I can’t stop smiling. Thank you for sending me to sleep with a joyous heart. Blessings xxoo Kim Rodrigues February 13, 2022 at 6:09 AM Blessings to you too! I’m smiling because you’re smiling :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 12, 2022 at 10:18 PM A sweet tale of hearts aflutter! Imagery rich and lovely. :) Kim Rodrigues February 13, 2022 at 6:09 AM Thank you, sweet poet!

Michelle Faulkner February 12, 2022 at 8:52 PM A great description of that feeling of butterflies when you meet that special one, wonderful entry for the contest! Kim Rodrigues February 12, 2022 at 9:17 PM Thank you, Michelle!