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Bullies

Bullies

Stagnant...as the water of a springless pond...waiting...covered in the culmination of surface slime.---deborah burch©7.19.17
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Stagnant springless pond
Covered in green surface slime
Still bullfrog waits

©deborah burch©11.19.17
( haiku)

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Robert Pettit Date: 4/4/2021 7:26:00 PM There are a lot of frogs and tadpoles in a lake behind a school near my hometown. Your haiku reads like an accurate description of that lake. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 11/23/2017 4:41:00 PM I like the image you create, Deborah. I am sure that bullfrog is up to no good (that's what the slime is suggesting to me) and his wait won't be in vain! Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 11/21/2017 6:29:00 AM Beautiful, Cap'n Deb:) Login to Reply

Elizabeth Kinch Date: 11/19/2017 2:55:00 PM Superb! Login to Reply

Lin Lane Date: 11/19/2017 1:08:00 PM Good write, Deborah. They sure like to croak Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 11/19/2017 1:24:00 PM Thank you Lin!! :) Big hug!! Deb

Jan Allison Date: 11/19/2017 1:05:00 PM Brilliant haiku, I can relate to being bullied ... and maybe the bullfrog will croak Deborah lol:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 11/19/2017 1:23:00 PM Lol. Oh Jan!! You are always such a bright spot!! Funny pun! Lol! Thank you! Big Hugggs!!! Love you! Deb