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Bullies Stagnant...as the water of a springless pond...waiting...covered in the culmination of surface slime.---deborah burch©7.19.17 (Quote) Stagnant springless pond Covered in green surface slime Still bullfrog waits ©deborah burch©11.19.17 ( haiku)

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Date: 4/4/2021 7:26:00 PM
There are a lot of frogs and tadpoles in a lake behind a school near my hometown. Your haiku reads like an accurate description of that lake.
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Date: 11/23/2017 4:41:00 PM
I like the image you create, Deborah. I am sure that bullfrog is up to no good (that's what the slime is suggesting to me) and his wait won't be in vain! Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/21/2017 6:29:00 AM
Beautiful, Cap'n Deb:)
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Date: 11/19/2017 2:55:00 PM
Superb!
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Date: 11/19/2017 1:08:00 PM
Good write, Deborah. They sure like to croak
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Deborah Burch
Date: 11/19/2017 1:24:00 PM
Thank you Lin!! :) Big hug!! Deb
Date: 11/19/2017 1:05:00 PM
Brilliant haiku, I can relate to being bullied ... and maybe the bullfrog will croak Deborah lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Deborah Burch
Date: 11/19/2017 1:23:00 PM
Lol. Oh Jan!! You are always such a bright spot!! Funny pun! Lol! Thank you! Big Hugggs!!! Love you! Deb