Building Tension

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Written on February 12, 2024

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Death is no more than passing from one room into another. But there's a difference for me, you know. Because in that other room I shall be able to see. – Quote by Helen Keller In the dawn of my existence, Reaching through the quiet temptations, Releasing the fears, the tears, the years… Touching the moments with elation, Lighting the nights with my star, The one God gave me, to glow in my heart, In the dawn of my existence, I knew the warmth of sweetest love, The beauty of peace and hope, The music of faith that comforts the soul, The wonder of grace that restores. In the twilight of my living, Memories, some beautiful – some distant, Poured from my spirit, reflections, feelings, Sentimental trails, traveled by feet, Who journey through the dark, the fear, the night, Some blessings, some doubts, some tenderness, Some dread, some tones of grief, Many struggles before I’m led to the finish line, The end of all my strife. In the twilight of my living, Music plays, melodies in whispers, Singing of wonders, faded blessings who remind me, I have known the warmth of gentle hearts, I have known the darkness that dissuades all hopes, I have known what it is to love and to give – Without expectations of receiving anything myself. In the twilight, where I’m sensing, The final days, the final prayers, the finality of all those years, My mind echoes, in the expanse of time, Trembling thoughts, small dreams and insights, When He comes for me… as death takes my life, Will I sense the wonderful that is to come, Or will my fear silence that thrill? The beautiful light who pours out the quiet… As death sighs and I am no more, Yet, in the end, I find… I’m far more than I’ve ever been before!

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Date: 3/4/2024 8:31:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this spectacular poem, Regina. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!
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Date: 3/1/2024 7:51:00 PM
"I have known the darkness that dissuades all hopes, I have known what it is to love and to give – Without expectations of receiving anything myself" great self realization is vividly expressed. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/1/2024 7:55:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write again. Love your picture... Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................
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Date: 2/12/2024 8:47:00 PM
You've said so many things that many of us fill, Gina, in the mostly lovely way. It was a blessing to my soul to read your poetry today, especially this poem that goes on my FAV list. Thank you, my soulful friend. Bill
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Date: 2/12/2024 12:59:00 PM
Deep, wide and luminescent, like a sunset in thoughts.
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Date: 2/12/2024 12:04:00 PM
Gina, you write so beautifully of the journey. I love the first stanza with you in God's plan before light. I think of Queen Esther - "for such a time as this." And your last line - "more than I've ever been before" reflects not the last line of life but the new beginning that awaits us. Such a wonderful double meaning. What a wonderful thought - completeness, wholeness. So many beautiful images articulate your experiences and thoughts. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings for each day.
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Date: 2/12/2024 10:20:00 AM
A lovely write/picture. "Good Luck" We both wrote on this one... Have a blessed day writing away..........................
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Date: 2/12/2024 8:55:00 AM
I’m far more than I’ve ever been before! What a wonderful observation. In Heaven all will be bliss. I loved your quote too.
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