Buddha

The winding steps
     took me  to the crest  of the hill
   into the dark scented chamber.
  The Buddha looked  calm.
  The studded gems
  on the crown
    shimmered  in the incensed
    sacred   hall.
    I gazed at his half-opened
   down cast eyes
    tried   to penetrate
   deep into them.
   My sorrows melted away in no time
    and left me in the land of bliss.
    Saintly and pure. 
    If this be eternity
   perhaps I  had  experienced  it
   though It lasted.
  for a few seconds only.
  The downward descent of the hill
   placed me once again
  back to the mundane world
  of pleasures and pains
   seemingly apparent
    but not real.
   what remains is 
   the memory of Buddha.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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August 27, 2014 at 7:46 PM
SILIMA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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August 22, 2014 at 2:47 PM
Silima,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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August 22, 2014 at 7:47 AM
Lovely write Silima, warm images. Welcome to poetry soup :)
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August 21, 2014 at 11:32 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Silima - I choose your first lovely written free verse - Well done - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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August 21, 2014 at 7:10 AM
Absolutely touching... Lord Buddha's serene presence can be felt through your well chosen words. A great read. Thanks Prasenjit
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