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Buckets Without Summer Sand

Two impish girls by a ridge of the sea frolicked with wavelets lapping merrily as pink buckets swayed, in each little hand where clusters of moistened grains polished the sand bedecking castles on bright August skies; mermaids we dressed in ferns waiting to dry. Patty and I guarded the moats from the bad trolls with candles on gates as swooshing tides cajoled; a vignette we held in deep friendship’s mind when crests besieged our kingdom, how unkind as we fought the tides with shovels dug around, our legs standing firm to parry the roaring mound. But on our twelfth year, she caught a fever; Patty grew hazy, our beach empty right where all sandcastles dissolved from red to gray and no more turrets to chisel away . Now, summers without pails are a memory of two impish girls, on ridge of the sea. ……………………….. Memories of The Sea: Isaiah Zerbst’s Contest 5/14/2015
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Duncan Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 6:48 PM
Love the sea, love the write, and awesome win Nette,,,, thank you for coming to read my Cracked poem, I wrote it more than a year ago. Have a fab day :)
Maverick Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 1:21 AM
Congratulations on this winner Nette..'
Villarosa Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 1:47 AM
A very captivating and downright enticing to read. Congratulations on winning this contest, Nette. (^_^) Noel.
A   Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 2:45 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your Memory of the sea win. LUV LINDA
Fraser Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 2:29 PM
You've captured the image well in your poetry Nette, nice one, and congratulations, James :) :)
A  Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 10:20 AM
nice win Nette...... skat
Relish Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 2:05 AM
oh... what a wonderful scenery you have painted.. very nostalgic but the last part made me feel sad... congrats dear Nette... nad
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 11:08 PM
oh my , it ends so sadly, Nette. It is not true, is it? you really describe the building of the sand castle as if it were something you did personally. Love your ending couplet! Congrats for the win, I see!!
Roper Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 6:09 PM
Memories to remember of loving family, heartbreaking when Patty got sick. Congratulations on your win a 7 and hugs
Konos Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 12:25 PM
Very nice....I thoroughly enjoyed and Congratulations on your win...
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 12:09 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
Rv Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 9:42 AM
This is lovely!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D
Kendrick Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 7:51 AM
Reads like a winner..Creative way to maybe work real life story or happening into a poetic expression..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara
Muideen Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 1:29 AM
What a beautiful and interesting poem but sad touched....well penned, good luck for the contest.
Nunez Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 8:00 PM
Beautiful, poignant write. I have come to recognize your poetry, Nette. The words always move with grace and gentleness. Thank you for placing my entry in the winner's list. Your contests provide the inspiration and opportunity for new poets to join with short poems. May your creative works continue to soar, both in contests and in the charts! Kim :-)
La France Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 5:52 PM
nette, you have penned a sadly beautiful poem, great rhyming and phrasing within, 7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for my wonderful win in your Let Me Feel Your Lines Contest, I am so honoured
Gonza Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 12:22 PM
Absolutely painful and wonderful. You do get your feelings and this memorable experience across very well. The haunting images are still on my mind, Nette.
Das Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 3:12 AM
Delightful read. But what lingers long in the mind is the sad memory of Patty.7
Allison Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 2:08 AM
such charming imagery and the image is delightful - such a moving poem I found the twist at the end very emotional:-( good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7xx
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