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Bubble Tree

If I were to die...and come back to be I'd wish I were...a bubble tree My roots be spread...throughout the land Through open waters...and grains of sand My bubble flowers...would blossom all day For you to burst...when times are gray A million colors...would paint my bubbles A color for each...and all of your troubles I'd walk the earth...to share my seeds So I can kill...all of your weeds That strangle you...and cause you strife So that you can live...a better life I Am A Tree Poetry Contest Sponsor: Delilah Ventura 12-30-2019

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Funom Makama

Date: 1/10/2020 10:58:00 AM

This is beautiful. I love this masterpiece. Happy new year friend. Keep the lines blessing.

Indiana Shaw

Date: 1/5/2020 7:43:00 PM

There is nothing more therapeutic than bubbles Charles, I'm totally with you on this one . . . ; )

Charles Messina
Date: 1/6/2020 7:03:00 AM

Well said, I.S. Happy your on my side on this.. there should be more people in this world like you and I . . . ; )

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/4/2020 9:00:00 AM

This is an amazing gem dear friend, I don't thin you need best wishes for this contest, I think it's a certain win! Blessings, Jennifer.

Charles Messina
Date: 1/6/2020 7:04:00 AM

Aww.. so sweet, Jennifer. Thank you so much my dear friend. Blessings Always, Charlie :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 12/31/2019 10:42:00 PM

Be careful what you wish for, lest it come true.. lol... Bubble tree.. Anyway sweet poem and very strong entry in the contest.. Good luck..

Charles Messina
Date: 1/6/2020 7:06:00 AM

LOL...Thank you so much, Jenish. Much appreciate the Good Luck! Charlie

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/31/2019 10:02:00 AM

Charlie..this is so like you! Richard captured my feelings well, and so ditto! Best wishes Panagiota

Charles Messina
Date: 1/6/2020 7:08:00 AM

Aww. So nice, Panagiota. Thank you very much for the Good Luck! You have made me smile :) Hugs Charlie

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/31/2019 9:43:00 AM

This one lifted my spirits. I have a sudden craving for Bubble Tea. Blessings for 2020 Charlie. P.s. this will float to the top of the podium.

Charles Messina
Date: 1/6/2020 7:10:00 AM

Thanks, Rick. I appreciate your kind words my friend. Blessings to you and yours in the New Year and years to come. All the best, Charlie

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/30/2019 9:20:00 PM

This was fun to imagine. Unique idea.

Charles Messina
Date: 12/30/2019 9:28:00 PM

Thank you, Juliet. :) Wishing you a Healthy and Happy New Year!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/30/2019 8:56:00 PM

So original and creative. Great entry for the contest! ~ Bubble bather

Charles Messina
Date: 12/30/2019 9:04:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon...off to take my bubble bath (lol)

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/30/2019 4:40:00 PM

Very cool poem, Charles. Bravo.

Charles Messina
Date: 12/30/2019 9:03:00 PM

Thank you, cool Line :)