Brooding Nimbus
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27th June 2023
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Clouded thoughts, eyes are closed
Protection key, keep self enclosed
Feelings overwhelm, I am fraught
Eyes are closed, clouded thoughts
Sinking feeling, fear the worst
Could it be the bubble's burst
Uncontrollable mind, heart is reeling
Fear the worst, sinking feeling
Caught in the rain, I'm exposed
I knock on doors, but all are closed
Please let me repel my pain
I'm exposed, caught in the rain
Shadows cast, the weather brooding
Rainy day is concluding
I fear all the heartache I've amassed
The weather brooding, shadows cast
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