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His presence was like the screeching From someone scraping a fingernail Down a blackboard But I would miss him despite it all He wasn’t the one for me really He was tempted by drink And women and anything that Wasn’t a reality in his life His life is filled with lost moments And lost causes because he Doesn’t give in to the need to be Responsible and caring He said he loved me with his heart But it was a love for what it brought When I gave to him all that I had And didn’t take anything back He was afraid to really open up No one knew what he was Because he only showed his mask Of joy and kindness and no grief Grief was a part of his deepest heart It wound around his soul creating A wound that wouldn’t heal or scar Because it was continually reopened He was a liar with all that he said No promises whispered that were fulfilled He didn’t want anyone to see the real man The one who had problems deeper than sin And, sometimes, some ways, I miss him Even though I never once believed in him I could not because he was a broken word That refused to be spoken or written down

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/27/2019 3:24:00 PM
You nailed this one. I loved every word and read it twice, before it hit the fav. Ann
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Date: 10/27/2019 2:52:00 PM
WoW! Regina, What a sad and heartfelt write. I can relate to this poem. I was in love with a man that was incapable of love. All he wanted to was break me and make me feel worthless and dependent on him. He sounds like a horrible person right? But in hindsight I believe he was broken and couldn't give what he never known or experienced. Good write. -Alexis
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Date: 10/27/2019 1:47:00 PM
a life filled with lost moments, so sad...beautifully expressed "Radiant Regina"- I shall call you "RR" for now on, ok? XOXO :)-luloo
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Date: 10/27/2019 11:19:00 AM
Sounds like a most difficult person to love and have trust in. i enjoyed your portrayal of him.
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Date: 10/27/2019 9:19:00 AM
A very painful recollection of a broken person and a broken heart. Beautifully written and exquisitely painful.
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Date: 10/27/2019 3:55:00 AM
Seemed like a doomed relationship due to his actions and behaviour... we cant save everyone, sadly.. so deeply expressed..
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Date: 10/26/2019 11:43:00 PM
I have walked through the lines of this poem myself...sad, they lie to make themselves feel better i think, or look better, to hide the truth but i think they don't know how to really love because they didn't learn love growing up...i could feel this one Gina...excellent penning my friend... love and hugs :)
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