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Broken Winged Bird

As I gaze upon snow covered ground I see white, without a sound I know you never got to see me In the way that was meant to be I’ve tried to say a few things Breaking silence with my wings Only to be left with regrets And things created when we met Reactions from the heart, not seen Not meant to hurt or be mean Yet, the wind blows the smiles away With no chance to explain or stay Judgements rule sometimes unfair Without a chance to repair Misunderstandings, words unheard Silence stings, like a broken winged bird Heidi Sands 1/3/18 Placed 3rd in the New Year Standard contest.

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Date: 1/11/2018 10:55:00 AM
Such a nice write. Congratulations.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/11/2018 12:16:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 1/5/2018 12:33:00 AM
Gorgeous write of some very hard-hitting and candid truths ... well-done, and congrats on your win, Heidi! If only judgementalism began and ENDED with that person in the mirror. Blessings!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/5/2018 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Gary :)
Date: 1/4/2018 2:20:00 PM
well relayed, heidi... congrats with huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2018 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Nette :)
Date: 1/4/2018 10:29:00 AM
Sadly most people judge, and most of the time they are wrong... You described very poetically, with some great lines in your poem...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2018 10:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Silent One :)
Date: 1/4/2018 9:57:00 AM
How melancholy and beautiful, Heidi Communication is key and when it doesn't or can't happen, it does sting! Congrats and Happy Thursday !!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2018 10:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Mike :)
Date: 1/4/2018 8:39:00 AM
Sadly beautiful...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Mike :)
Date: 1/4/2018 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine poem and win.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2018 8:01:00 AM
Thank you Richard :)
Date: 1/4/2018 7:14:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2018 7:17:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 1/4/2018 6:39:00 AM
Returning with congrats, Heidi. Well earned win!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Vijay :)
Date: 1/4/2018 5:56:00 AM
This poem is very lovely Heidi. Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year too! : )
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Connie. Happy New Year :)
Date: 1/4/2018 4:19:00 AM
A lovely write Heidi. "Yet, the wind blows the smiles away," a beautiful line.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thank you James :)
Date: 1/3/2018 6:58:00 PM
Oh so nicely done Miss Heidi. I enjoyed it very much. Good luck in the contest! Hugs and smiles :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/3/2018 9:31:00 PM
Thank you Akkina :)
Date: 1/3/2018 5:57:00 PM
Nice descriptions and imagery...but life is life...something things we can change...Maybe...All the best Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/3/2018 5:59:00 PM
Thank you Arturo :)
Date: 1/3/2018 3:12:00 PM
Wow, such a melancholy and heartfelt write Heidi..well penned
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/3/2018 3:17:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 1/3/2018 2:11:00 PM
Lovely poem Heidi..meaningful and deep in thought..well written!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/3/2018 2:27:00 PM
Thank you Vijay :)

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