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Broken White Doves

All of my heart and all of my love I've read so many poems of broken white doves Situations many, that brought them too write To watch their partners, walk out of sight Their words i read on the tablets they scribe Wheels of confusion from their hurting inside Heartbreak and pain, staining their hearts Dazed and confused, as why they had to part Words of comfort, from families and friends Consoling thoughts that help their mend Pray fully stronger as the days and weeks gain To trust in another, extinguish the pain The above situations are a fork in their road Heavy on their hearts, emotional load Today's today, look to tomorrow For i hope in your heart, their will be no more sorrow

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Rebecca Beausoleil

Date: 6/27/2009 7:06:00 PM

i just starting writing and everything i've written so far dwells on the past. while reading this at first i started to tear up by the end i was smiling thank you

Shirley Grant

Date: 6/15/2009 4:43:00 AM

I really like this one. so heartfelt ,so painful is a lost love. you inspire me very much. Shirley Grant

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/13/2009 7:44:00 PM

i missed this and its beautiful--hope our tomorrows and yours will be shining bright and beautiful--lovely---charma

Valerie Bellefleur

Date: 6/13/2009 3:39:00 PM

I love your usage of 'broken white doves' to describe the pain of breakup - it hits home as I left my hubby recently due to alcoholism and have returned to him with some thread of hope for us as he lies in hospital as we speak.. There is nothing more painful than loss no matter the cause.. Thank you for your comments and keep up the good work..

John Rhinem

Date: 6/12/2009 12:16:00 PM

Beautiful Compassionate Write James!!:) And You are right; poetry for many begins with a need for the releasings of ones own hearts hurts; and usually love is the common denominator which holds these keys....And I see a very tender, sincere and caring heart inside of this writer, "You!"~"Wonderful Poem"~"My Love & Warmth Always To You & Your Loves, John!!":) Bye ~

Diane Christian

Date: 6/12/2009 11:24:00 AM

a very beautiful poem and could be a great prayer to end all suffering and sorrow of this kind, a powerful message God bless you from diane

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/12/2009 9:49:00 AM

This is excellent and love how deep your heart is friend. We all have had lost a love or that one that got away. This is a powerful message. You have made my day with this uplifitng piece of magnificence.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/12/2009 7:50:00 AM

Love the title to this piece..love the flow of the write and the message is spot on..good work.