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Broken Themes

Golden meadows rising with the morning sun Jogging with me, recalling broken themes Writing, scratching, re-writing on the run Thumping heart cheering swinging hands to dream Like trying to draw water from a water-less stream. August 6, 2017

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2020 8:34:00 PM

haha, I am going all over the place trying to find an oldie and I fell on this one where I said back in 2018, "finally I found an oldie I had not read of yours" (I have found it again but this tiime it's been read!!)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2018 3:22:00 PM

Finally, I found an oldie I had not read of yours!! I love how you made the metaphor to writing with the waterless stream. So cool!! Also I love this poetry form you used.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/2/2017 9:46:00 AM

That's an impossible task given at the end of this very thoughtful poem, Vijay. I enjoyed reading this insightful poem. Love and joy always.

Anita Harris

Date: 8/27/2017 10:33:00 AM

I've been trying to convey the "writing, scratching, re-writing" process to my granddaughter. She wants it to be perfect when it leaves her pen.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2017 11:38:00 AM

Thanks, Anita!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/14/2017 5:17:00 PM

I was so delighted to read your poem..Thanks for the entry in my contest your participation was encouraging and uplifting to me..I have experienced the writing, scratching and the re-write many times..Congrats on your placement..Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/14/2017 5:33:00 PM

Delighted by your visit and love your feedback! Thank you.