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Broken Oak

Intro: 
To be a writer such as he, there are none
  His work outlasts the best, I’m sure…
        …~William Shakespeare, Hamlet, 1601-
“to hold, as t’ were, the mirror up to nature…” 


                                                           BROKEN OAK
                                         ~*Rispetto/ Miranda Lambert ©*~
                                                      Contest: “The Tree”
                                                     Written: 04/20/2011

                             Nestled on scaly plates, known as the White Oak
                           Pennetly lobed leaves, twiddled between my fingers
                             While the morning dew, the summer sun did soak
                                      As the aura of this native wood lingers
                                  In the “Y” shaped branches, only I could fit
                                 And hour or two I stay, as luck would have it
                          Ghastly winds blow my hair, my branch starts to sway
                                 We both come tumbling down, dwindling away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Butterfly Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 10:49 AM
THANK ALL FOR YOUR VERY KIND AND VERY CHERISHED COMMENTS. THANK YOU CONSTANCE FOR MY PLACEMENT IN YOUR CONTEST!!! I CERTAINLY AM HONORED!
Brown Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 6:07 AM
Congratulations Randa on your win in Constance's "The Tree" contest. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 7:30 AM
Beautiful poem Miranda.Congrats on your win---kash
Mannan Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 4:56 AM
Such a lovely memory Randa. many congrats.
Mehta Avatar
April 24, 2011 at 3:09 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance. Miranda
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2011 at 2:28 PM
It reminded me of Rock a bye baby in a tree top. Great subject , a broken oak, and Interesting way to discuss the meeting. Congratulations on your win!!
Onclaud Avatar
April 24, 2011 at 6:11 AM
so well done with descriptive mages, randa.. my special congrats on your super win! :) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 8:55 PM
Congrats Miranda on your 3rd place win in the tree contest with this poem about your lovely tree chosen... a great way to celebrate the Easter holiday with a great win luv..
Freeman Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 6:45 PM
Great to see you near the top again Miranda. Congratulations on your worthy poem honor in third place.
Richards Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 5:45 PM
What a lovely, rather bittersweet poem! Congratulations, Miranda!
Devonshire Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 5:37 PM
Oaks are great for climbing, Randa. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
George   Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 5:11 PM
I commented on this earlier, Miranda. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
La France Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 4:47 PM
Congratulations, Miranda, on 3rd place in my contest, I just loved your tree, I had one also as a child where I passed many hours~~
La France Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 7:47 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest. Beautiful!
Long Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 6:23 AM
thanks randa, I will.. I find writing very soothing and relaxing.. Have a great day Cory
Long Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 5:56 AM
very ice good luck in the contest.. cory
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