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We are all broken into separate pieces Brothers uncles mothers and nieces Fractured ways of thinking Cool-aide drinking Caught between real and false Can you feel we’re all sinking False prophets We have become our own religion relying only on ourselves for every decision Believing the answer is accomplished through division We fools stopped seeking wisdom Too big a gap between higher and lower The world moves fast but our thinking grows slower The rich protect themselves in their high tower Unrest grows hour by hour Who in the end do you think holds the power? So crumbs are thrown to the masses But that won’t stop the clashes of the classes Change is happening so slow it flows like molasses There are too many people sheltered in under passes Plastic dollars are of no use No one will be left to pay Caesars taxes Black, brown yellow and white men When will they see clearly again? Will each own the other’s pain? Red blood flows within each vein This current world order is impossible to maintain Every man woman and child is an important part of the chain They all need love, food, shelter, sunshine and rain Top heavy systems will topple under the strain When it does we will all have to begin again. If we think this is working We are no longer sane. At an essential level we’re all the same can’t you feel We’re circling the drain? For Brian’s Choice 3 Contest.

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Date: 6/9/2021 5:41:00 PM
Read a few of your poems, amazing, profound, you're an artist. Enjoyed what you're saying!
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Date: 6/15/2020 1:37:00 PM
Fantastic finake Richard Circling the drain Love it Scrapping the barrel Also may i say thank you very much for placing me in your contest Cheers my sincere gratitude
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Date: 5/20/2020 2:21:00 PM
Richard so much truth and reality written here.
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Date: 5/16/2020 7:59:00 PM
Until we “each own each other’s pain” can we truly empathize with each other? I think not.
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Date: 5/16/2020 2:08:00 PM
Glad I came back to this one, it is prophetic. Not that U are fire & brimstone, but Richard, in your calm way, YOU TELL IT LIKE IT THIS. This unfair order is not sustainable without increasingly horrendous crimes. Now, on "SHALOM": Jesus told his disciples to share SHALOM two by two (Mark 6; matt 10) with the Gospel, & John 14:27. It is the Isaiah 26:3 and Jesus' "Peace beyond [human] understanding." Peace that FREES us!
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Date: 5/13/2020 3:16:00 PM
Another amazing poem Rick, I like the rhythmic melodic feel when it is read out loud. Classic line clashes of the classes...flows like molasses! Awesome write..too bad the truth is in there and it's pretty sad!
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Date: 5/6/2020 5:10:00 AM
Great write, Rick. Belated congrats on POTD. -CM
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2020 8:26:00 AM
No worries, I appreciate the visit Charles.
Date: 5/4/2020 12:10:00 PM
We have been circling the drain for many years. Very nicely written!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/4/2020 12:42:00 PM
Thanks Grace, so nice to have you here.
Date: 5/4/2020 10:02:00 AM
So aptly written, dear. What has this world come to. You are the voice of reason. Congrats on POTD.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/4/2020 10:07:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, crazy days for sure. Hugs Rick.
Date: 5/3/2020 10:28:00 PM
We seem doomed to keep repeating the same mistakes and not learning from them each generation. Kind of feels like a hamster on the wheel. Good stuff Rick! Congratulations on your deserving honor of POTD! xxoo
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/4/2020 10:07:00 AM
Thanks so much Connie. ;0)
Date: 5/3/2020 4:53:00 AM
Congratulations Rick on your awesome POTD and the honor bestowed upon you, Hugs, Jennifer.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2020 7:52:00 AM
Thanks Jennifer. ;0)
Date: 5/2/2020 8:17:00 PM
Another inspiring poem Rich. I enjoyed reading your poems this morning. Have a great day and stay safe. God keep you and watch over your family my brother.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2020 7:52:00 AM
You as well Gideon. Blessings Rick.
Date: 5/2/2020 8:14:00 PM
Another inspiring poem Rich. I enjoyed reading your poems this morning. Have a great day and stay safe. God keep you and watch over your family my brother.
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Date: 5/2/2020 8:32:00 AM
Hi Richard, I really enjoyed reading this, you have great insight. Look after you and yours, Frances
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2020 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Frances I will.
Date: 5/1/2020 11:04:00 AM
What an amazing poet you are, gifted and clever, and such poetic perfect pictures you portray - kudos my friend, I couldn't agree with you more! Blessings, Jennifer.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2020 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Jennifer. Hugs Rick.
Date: 5/1/2020 5:21:00 AM
Circling the drain. And as Bob Dyln pointed out ‘it’s a hard rain gonna fall’...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/1/2020 8:34:00 AM
Indeed.
Date: 4/30/2020 8:09:00 PM
Very impressive poem with a lot of profundities to expound upon... "Believing the answer is accomplished through division" ... I would say that not all division is inherently bad IF the dividing line is truth and untruth. The things a populace could all unite behind could be littered in errors ... and we'd all fall off the cliff ... lol.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/1/2020 8:40:00 AM
It seems peoples idea of truth is becoming more divergent. Caring for ones neighbor has been replaced with protectionism. The haves abandoning the have nots. The rich believing they provide wealth and jobs for the country. The fact that the gap is growing, proves the system is broken.
Date: 4/30/2020 1:44:00 PM
You are right, what you say are truths that many ignore .. I can see why this got POTD... Congrats
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/1/2020 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Silent’s. Blessings Rick.
Date: 4/30/2020 12:19:00 PM
Spot on analysis combined with outstanding poetic construction. Really good work. Answers, we must have courage to except the answers and solutions to your questions.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2020 1:26:00 PM
Thanks Kenneth. I appreciate the comment and visit.
Date: 4/30/2020 9:36:00 AM
Told you this is really good! Congrats on POTD, Richard! ~ gw
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2020 10:45:00 AM
Thanks Gershon. ;0)
Date: 4/30/2020 7:03:00 AM
I am too happy for you my dearest old friend, Richard! Your well deserved POTD honor has filled my heart with Joy! Congratulations! Take care!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2020 8:25:00 AM
Thanks My friend. I hope all is well in Greece. Blessings Rick.
Date: 4/30/2020 3:23:00 AM
Sadly true, Richard, well versed poetry:)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2020 8:25:00 AM
Thanks Jo.
Date: 4/30/2020 2:10:00 AM
:) circling? I am in it waiting for ya all! Nice poem!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2020 8:46:00 AM
Right behind you buddy.
Date: 4/29/2020 11:29:00 PM
I am short of words. this pandemic has taught us a big lesson, which is: GOING BACK TO THE BASICS. We need to start giving back the value of the things we should appreciate more: Love, family, kindness, sharing, humanity and give vanities less relevance. I am not surprised this turned out to be POTD. Well deserved my very good friend.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2020 8:41:00 AM
Yes that is good advice. I miss Sunday diners with my son and daughter-in-law. Thanks for your kind visit.
Date: 4/29/2020 7:51:00 PM
Really well done, really true, wondering what the future will bring, will people rise up without destroying each other? Will they stand up for the earth. So have thought about all of this -- wonderful to see it written so well in a poem Put this in a magazine or a newspaper, people have to start thinking about this.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2020 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Linda, I hope people come together. Thanks for your visit. Hugs Rick.
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