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Broken Hope

She stabs my tender heart With a staff of anger Spinning me into a whirl Hurling me beyond A terror unspeakable She tears my very soul And dampens my eyes By being as harsh As she can be I harbor slim hope Will she come back Can I receive love again Like we once were But the pain exists still From her horrid being Breaking my spirit in two Now I wander around The dark-lit sky Simmers a forlorn glance Nothing is really left That resembles our love What once was Never to be again She crushed that dream A long time ago Destroying and annihilating Bruising my heart Again and again She carries on I will never hold her again She has thrown me For the last time I will now leave her In her own fierceness Of an ex girlfriend a long time ago
Entrant into John Heck's "VISCERAL!" contest 8/21/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/21/2012 8:50:00 PM
aha!! I guessed right. I was thinking this was a visceral one and I was right!!! You have used it for that contest! Btw,I changed my triolet line. Thanks for the heads up. I can't believe it. a hundred triolets I must have written and I forget where to repeat that first line!
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Date: 8/21/2012 3:09:00 PM
Sad experience in your life..Reads like a winning write for the contest..Glad that you can look bad now and write about it..Thanks for stopping by my work..Glad that you got a chuckle..Sara
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Date: 8/21/2012 2:17:00 PM
Oh, I can certainly empathise with this one, Russell - heartfelt write indeed, my friend
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