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Broken-Hearted Woman's Song

Broken-Hearted Woman’s Song This is a broken-hearted woman’s song with lyrics that would make the angels weep of loneliness in life that lasted much too long a disappointing, sorrow that cut deep. Many nights this woman’s tears were shed for love while others used its name so carelessly. The actions that she took, no other one should judge for each of us thinks of ourselves, you see. She’s been near strangled, scorned and verbally abused all along having qualities of gold. Most people thought her goodness was just to be used. With lies and courtesies her love they stole. Yet, I see her smiling now, head unbowed. Where does she get the strength to go on living? She says that of each battle scar, she is proud. Life has taught her how to be forgiving. 10/14/17

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Date: 11/16/2017 7:37:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Janis. Congrats on a well-deserved 1st place.
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Date: 11/14/2017 5:34:00 PM
A beautiful expression of what it means to be forgiving. We learn most often through heartbreak. Wonderful and so deserving of first placement Janis! Congratulations! : )
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Date: 11/11/2017 9:50:00 PM
Wonderful write and a well-deserved win, Janice - congratulations and blessings, friend! :-) <3
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Date: 11/11/2017 8:37:00 PM
Such a well-written, heartfelt and heart-wrenching poem, that shows the power of forgiveness, Janis. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/10/2017 11:19:00 PM
Congratulations, Janis, on a great write. Hugs eve ~`*
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Date: 11/10/2017 10:58:00 PM
Congrats Janis. Very good work.
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Date: 11/10/2017 8:06:00 AM
Your poem is eloquently powerful...and raises so many "whys": why put up with it, why stay, why suffer!! "But wait - hope!" "Where"? "There, my friend...there...just below dawns newest horizon". "What colours does this bold knight sport, friend"? "Colours"? "Why bless you friend he is my Lord Internet -- and he has come to unite this world"! They say talking never solved anything...I beg to strongly differ! Humbling and sobering poetry! My best regards, Janis. :) john P.s Very beautiful too!
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Date: 10/17/2017 11:04:00 PM
Very sweet yet heart-wrenching - poignant and lovely - enjoyed this very much!Best wishes and big congrats on your well-earned win, Janis - keep up the great poetry, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/17/2017 1:40:00 PM
Janis, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write !
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Date: 10/17/2017 12:52:00 PM
Powerful poetry, Janis! The ending crescendo left me breathless. Your loving fearlessness is a beautiful, endearing quality. Your pen's brave expressions is so Blue Monday liberating. Strong heart poetry. Loved it. Excellent poetry that shines. An instant fave. Love and more love always.
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Date: 10/16/2017 9:36:00 PM
Janis, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 10/14/2017 9:55:00 PM
Really well done.
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Date: 10/14/2017 9:37:00 PM
An absolutely wonderful pen Janis, poignant, my best to you for the contest :) xomo
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