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Broken-Hearted At Sunrise

The sun excitedly rose to the skies, as though it had quenched its thirst from my tears. The whole night I wept for you, when you shut the door one last time; you shut the door so hard that my conscience shouted "This is It!" deep within my soul. You left me lonely and bruised, tightly holding the sheets as though I had a muscle pull in my heart. I cried out your name so loudly, my neighbors thought I had lost you in the night. Partly they were right, because you had left my life, leaving a big hole in my soul. I held your photograph throughout the night, as I admired the face I would never touch and caress ever again. I applied your favorite lavender-scented perfume on myself, that you had forgotten as you left hurriedly from my presence. Carefully I touched and smelled the spot that your body lay, before you left me cold. I know you will take time to open this mail; probably months. You are the best thing that has ever happened to me. If you are reading this mail, be certain that I am no longer part of your existence. You are free and welcome to visit my memorial service next month, at my folk's place..... Date of Entry: 13/10/2017 Contest Sponsor: Broken Wings Contest Name: Broken-Hearted At Sunrise

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Date: 10/23/2017 1:38:00 PM
A sad entry, Teddy, but eloquently phrased! Congratulations on your win. Regards, John.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2017 5:52:00 AM
Hi John. Thank you so much for your applause! ;-)
Date: 10/17/2017 11:00:00 PM
Best wishes and big congrats on your well-earned win, Teddy - keep up the great poetry, my friend! :-)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/21/2017 7:45:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind applause and enjoying my write, Gregory! :-)
Date: 10/17/2017 1:38:00 PM
Teddy, congratulations on your win in my contest, you truly captured the heart-broken theme and what an ending !
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/21/2017 7:43:00 PM
Thank you so much for your warm applause, BW! I really enjoyed your contest! *^_^*
Date: 10/16/2017 9:32:00 PM
Teddy, congratulations on your win!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/17/2017 4:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve! I really appreciate your visit! *^_^*
Date: 10/16/2017 6:12:00 PM
Teddy, this is pure heartache. It was so hard to read. I did not expect your ending. Congratulations on your placement in the " Broken Hearted Poem contest ". It was well deserved- Alexis
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/17/2017 4:56:00 AM
Thank you so much for your warm applause, Alexis! *^_^* This poem is for people who feel as though their world has ended at such moments. They should know they are not alone, and deserve better! ;-)
Date: 10/13/2017 1:33:00 PM
oh Teddy the ending is so so so sad it wasn't at all what i was expecting. i would hate for this to happen for real to anyone it must be devastating when someone takes their life after a relationship crumbles:-( hugs jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/17/2017 4:52:00 AM
Me too, Jan. Unfortunately that's what happens to some relationships around the world :( Well, thank you for reading and commenting on my work! *^_^*
Date: 10/13/2017 10:45:00 AM
OH ouch. oh OUCH. my best to you for the contest Teddy :) xomo
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/17/2017 4:50:00 AM
Thank you so much for enjoying my piece, Maureen! *^_^*

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