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"You shall not chase my gloom away! There's such a charm in melancholy." (Samuel Rogers, 1814) I think, I was born under the shadow of melancholy. I was a woebegone girl since birth. My mother said she never saw anyone with such an aching heart. To me there was anguish and agony everywhere in my world. At the side of the road, a dead bird would bring me to tears and with a heavy heart I would hold a funeral. My parents refused to let me bury squirrels but I prayed quite mournfully for their souls. When my sister died in childhood, I was overcome with grief and downhearted. I became desolate and miserable. In my eyes there is a sadness still that could shatter glass, it is so sorrowful. As I grew up, I was a moody girl, taken to reflection and reverie, deep in my innermost thoughts and morose- and thus a poet was born. broken bleeding heart there is such heartache to see- beautiful sadness ___________________________ July 16, 2019 Poetry/Haibun/Melancholy Copyright Protected, ID 19- 1166-845-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 7/31/2019 4:29:00 PM
So good..... BBH.. I like reading your poems as they resonate with me... But, I don't like to bury squirrels.. Has to be done though... Sooner or later.. Best wishes DAMO x
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Date: 7/19/2019 10:14:00 PM
It seems that this is what created the beautiful understanding you have "Dear Heart" as a poet.
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Date: 7/19/2019 6:15:00 PM
"Beautiful sadness" says it all. This haibun is an immediate FAV for me . Great poetry, Dear Heart. All the best~Warren
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Date: 7/18/2019 9:03:00 PM
beautiful and very deep, Dear Heart, great example for the contest. Hugs
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Date: 7/17/2019 9:05:00 AM
Your words are simple yet so powerful. And your emotion and pain wrap themselves around each word and we are left in awe and sympathetic to your internal struggles. Emile.
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Date: 7/17/2019 12:12:00 AM
Oh Constance your sadness seeps from every line in this beautiful haiburn I especially love the haiku ending - I will try and write something sad but much prefer humour. hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/16/2019 6:02:00 PM
Example for my contest, Writing Challenge 2, July 2019- Melancholy- I used the form Haibun, but you can use any form.
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