Broken Alter

I feel the devil calling me,
a voice I choose not to hear

He's called before 
when I was young

But even then I refused to listen

Growing up with an innate sense of right
and wrong
The path to righteousness was easy to find
but laden with snares and pitfalls

I've been caught in my share (more than) --

In the woods behind my house
about a mile hike 
stands an old wooden church,
abandoned and fallen to ruin

I've stood on the weathered floor
and stared up at the vaulted ceiling
The only sound I heard
was the sound the wind makes
when it blows through an empty tunnel

When I was a child
I heard the Voice of God

Now I search for it 
in the decaying wood 
and broken altar
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Makama Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 8:34 AM
Amazing! Amazing! So amazing. So deep, my senses are pulled out to tick a yes in every line. Great work friend.
Chircop Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 9:27 AM
When I was a child I heard the voice of God..Now I search for it in the decaying wood and broken altar.This hit home James... I can so relate to it.How easy it was for me to love God as a child..How wonderful it felt each time I visited church...How different from nowadays that I'm an adult.I go to mass oftenly on Sunday..basically because I need to pass on nmy beliefs to my daughter..but do I hear God ?Feel God?I 'm still searching..Hoping to find his pure joy again..Awesome to read you again.
Theraven Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 12:59 AM
James, Inspiration from the inspired, a fav for me. -Richard
Shepard Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 6:23 PM
I really like this. BTW God still speaks with you. It's just that children hear his message more easily. Keep listening!
Tefft Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 1:44 PM
Very nice. I like it.
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