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You said I fell too hard too fast My heart not healed from my wounded past The angry words The cruel remarks another rejection Alone in the dark Tired of hurting tired of pain I never want to feel again Can't stop crying Tears fall like rain All of my efforts Always in vain Will it ever end? My empty life? Within my heart A twisted knife My tears won't stop My Heart Won't mend Always broken Always the end I'll say goodbye I'll walk away Can't take this heartache For one more day I'll hear your voice I'll see your face And fade into darkness Away from this place I'll be forgotten I won't be missed Gone from this world I no longer exist ~ Pati Elzey ~

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Date: 5/21/2016 9:18:00 AM
Patricia Elzey, nice to see this again, hope to See a new One from you. SKAT
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Date: 3/20/2016 10:47:00 PM
Patricia, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and you're poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be you're newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Patricia Elzey
Date: 3/20/2016 11:24:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 3/20/2016 6:46:00 PM
Patricia, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/20/2016 6:35:00 PM
Good write.. with a sad feel
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