Broken

Broken in a place where my wounds cant be fixed
Torn by the aids and the drugs that killed you when I was six.
Cant get it out my head, Why my world decided to change
I live life to win, only because its a live or die game.

Broken in my heart the day they took me away
All because of a man that choose to rape me that day
Being raised by strangers in different homes
I never got over the fact that momma left me all alone.

Broken in a way that changed my whole life
Gang banging and drugs, and carrying a gun with a knife
Raised in the streets and taught by different men,
Living a life I thought was real, but all for pretend.

Broken into pieces, pieces that cant be fixed
I had to fight my way through but started to get tired of the ****.
I had to make a choice and I had to make it fast,
But than that day came where my time did not last.

I had my mind set on wanting to do the right thing
but how will that happen if life always seem to rain
I had to push and push til my breakthrough came in
Finally I was broken to wanna live life again.

I fought through every war, I surrendered through all the pain
Everything I lost, I took back and regained.
Broken once before but never broken again
I thank god  today that he gave me the chance to win.

                   "Broken"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 4/10/2016 1:42:00 AM
Raquel Brown, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. **LINDA**
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Date: 11/17/2011 3:02:00 PM
Very nice write! I'm glad that you took that chance.Now I'm just letting you know anytime you use the word"God" in a poem.It should be capitalized.Or for that matter anytime you write the word or type it. :-) I'm not being a smart_$$ or anything.I was told when I wrote it the same way....Wow! The pain is still getting me.
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Date: 11/17/2011 3:21:00 PM
Thank you. Glad that you enjoyed. Anything I write comes from real experiences. Just trying to find a way to start off my writing career. Your comment means a lot. Thanks once again.
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