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Shattered pieces Of my broken heart Painful glimpses Of zest torn apart Broken feelings Jagged edges cut Useless thinking Pain trashing my guts Running away Takes my troubles close Just for today Pain brings one more dose Sense furious fate Breaking bonds binding A broken plate Cuts my deep feelings Leon Enriquez 03 September 2018 Singapore

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Date: 9/22/2023 11:20:00 PM
I really dig your poem Leon. Is it about any particular incident or more general feelings ("general feelings" is a lame descriptor I know, but I can't think of sometime more apropos at the moment)
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Date: 9/22/2023 11:20:00 PM
I really dig your poem Leon. Is it about any particular incident or more general feelings ("general feelings" is a lame descriptor I know, but I can't think of sometime more apropos at the moment)
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 9/26/2023 9:52:00 AM
Dear Robert: Thank you for your visit. This pain is more about psychic pain. Leon

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