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Bring On Spring

Rain be gone, I'm done with you. Bring on spring, Earth starts anew. Flowers bloom, Wild birds sing. I'm through with winter, Bring on spring. Daffodils, crocuses, Lilacs too, Frost replaced By morning dew. Breathe fresh air In sunshine bright. Raise your face To bright sunlight. Happiness shines With the sun. Winter be gone, You are done.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/5/2011 6:40:00 AM
this is so lovely, simplicity of the way it is, yet so inviting. Harry
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Date: 1/4/2011 12:27:00 PM
simply inviting, francine.. the way you made this piece flow like spring's gaze is remarkable.. thank you for appreciating my special piece for you in your contest.. i'm touched! and best winning wishes for this stunning one..:) nette
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Date: 1/4/2011 11:15:00 AM
Looking foward to spring also... although after your entry in "spicy"" its still warm over here.... wow....great image...love Michael
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Date: 1/4/2011 5:39:00 AM
Deeply honoured to receive success in your contest. It is a great incentive to write more and try to improve my skill. With the help and guidance of you and other kind members I feel that every day I attend a workshop. As I left school to work at 12 I did not get any education, except in the school of hard knocks, until I was 47, I feel that I must learn what I can, while I can. Oh Yes, do bring on spring. Your fantastic write gives a vivid picture of what is to come. Heart felt thanks. Eamon
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Date: 1/3/2011 10:26:00 PM
Is this what you are looking for in your latest contest? This seems to fit all the requirements for the competition. It is quite descriptive with some very good rhyming.
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