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Brightness

The sun rises, shines across the snow Reflecting brightness, everywhere Highlighting and lifting this prayer Clear blue skies are welcome to show Even the shadows are pretty pictures Some are still, some waving around Winter creates a soothing sound Bringing comfort, as do some scriptures Icicles glisten, so bright to the eye Winter brings us so much light In special ways with every sight It enlightens me, lifts me to the sky I wish upon others to take a sweet moment Even cold air is so fresh to breathe In a minute, it can help relieve Those murky thoughts, not worth to be spent Heidi Sands 1/8/21

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Date: 1/9/2021 12:26:00 PM
Good advice Heidi. There is so much beauty all around us. God Bless, JB
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/9/2021 1:56:00 PM
That's right. So much brightness around us and I find even more in the winter, with the sun and snow and ice shining! Thank you for your kind comment. God Bless :)
Date: 1/8/2021 5:04:00 PM
Hello Heidi … you do write wonderful picture poems of your surrounds and this verse is one of the finest - thank you Heidi - Lindsay
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/9/2021 6:39:00 AM
That is so kind of you to say Lindsay. This location inspires me very much. Thank you. Happy New Year :)
Date: 1/8/2021 4:27:00 PM
even the shadows are pretty pictures, "what a poetic line" another beautiful nature poem from you dear poet
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/9/2021 6:38:00 AM
Thank you very much Frederic. Happy New Year :)
Date: 1/8/2021 2:27:00 PM
This is a worthy portrait of nature to behold from your creative mind, Heidi....Even the shadows are pretty pictures--brilliantly said.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/9/2021 6:37:00 AM
Thank you Vijay! I am happy to see your feedback. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 1/8/2021 12:35:00 PM
Heidi, the serenity evoked by your lovely winter scene is palpable! A very beautiful write! I wish for you a beautiful 2021 xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/8/2021 12:49:00 PM
That is so kind of you to say Mike. Thank you very much. I hope you have a great 2021 New Year! :)
Date: 1/8/2021 12:01:00 PM
- A beautiful winter poem, Heidi :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/8/2021 12:26:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I hope you have a nice weekend too! :)
Date: 1/8/2021 10:04:00 AM
Heidi, you have penned a beautiful scene in words, love you poem, well done _Constance
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/8/2021 12:26:00 PM
Thank you Constance. I am happy to hear you love this one. Happy New Year :)
Date: 1/8/2021 8:21:00 AM
Hi Heidi, You composed such a lovely poem. Good imagery and content. Your wish was thoughtful and kind. Well done. Happy New Year. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/8/2021 12:25:00 PM
Thank you very much Alexis. I hope you are having a happy New Year! I appreciate your comment and support :)

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