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Brightest Star

It's been I awhile since I told you how I feel. I love you with all my heart and soul you give me such a thrill. We're in a better place after so much heartache. I want to whisper sweet I love you's all through the night, I don't know how much silence I can take. Can you please forget about yesterday and past hurts. My entire being is about to go insane, I'm on passion alert. I love you and want to spend the rest of my life with you. Only you and you alone can stop me from feeling sad and blue. I was young and now I'm older and I know how special you are. Baby the spirit that you have shines brighter than the brightest star. Alexis Y. 4-18-16

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/6/2016 6:56:00 PM

Dear Alexis, you are so much in love that you missed few things here and there.....

Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/7/2016 1:08:00 AM

Always my friend....

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2016 7:45:00 PM

Hi Pashang, You know love can cause you to do strange things. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Anthony Mark

Date: 5/21/2016 3:10:00 PM

Nice sentiment, a couple of typos that need sorting tho...line one a rogue " I" ...and line 12 needs a " to" go insane.....

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2016 7:48:00 PM

Hi Anthony, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you informed me about the typos. I'm glad you stopped by:-) Alexis

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/18/2016 7:08:00 PM

Your sweet, intense sincerity is sexy Alexis. This is a beautiful love poem...J.A.B.

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2016 7:50:00 PM

Hi Justin, It's so nice to see you. Thanks for such a kind encouraging review. It's always a pleasure when you stop by:-) Alexis

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/15/2016 10:46:00 AM

Such a beautiful romantic write!! :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/16/2016 8:10:00 AM

Hi Arthur, It's nice so to see you. I'm glad you saw it as a beautiful and romantic. I'm glad you stopped by - Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/15/2016 6:17:00 AM

- Beautiful and touching written, Alexis - Nice to see you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/16/2016 8:11:00 AM

Hi Anne- Lise, It's nice to see you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm glad you stopped by- Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/15/2016 5:30:00 AM

How wonderful for one to let his heart sing the melody of love! Wish you never stop singing my dearest, Alexis! Excellently done!

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/16/2016 8:15:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, It's so nice to see you. Thank you so much for such a kind comment and review. I'm glad you stopped by- Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/15/2016 4:12:00 AM

Love is the most contrasting emotion there is, hands down! It keeps you hovering between heaven and hell! Excellent Alexis! : )

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/16/2016 8:17:00 AM

Hi Connie, It's nice to see you. Thanks for such a thoughtful response. I appreciate that you stopped by- Alexis

Peter Dome

Date: 5/15/2016 2:49:00 AM

Beautiful but so sad my friend. well done. Pete.

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/15/2016 3:15:00 AM

Hi Peter, That's just how love can be sometimes beautiful yet sad. Thanks for supporting my art- Alexis

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 5/14/2016 11:50:00 PM

Lovely so nice poem.

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/16/2016 8:13:00 AM

Hi Etienne, I'm glad you saw it as lovely. I appreciate that you stopped by- Alexis

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/14/2016 6:23:00 PM

Happy you're back dear. What a lovely write....a bright shining star to guide you, sweetie. Hugs

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/14/2016 7:23:00 PM

Hi Eileen, It's nice to see you. Thank you for such a kind comment- Alexis

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/14/2016 6:02:00 PM

So glad to see your star shining bright! :) big smiles!

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/14/2016 7:31:00 PM

Hi Casarah, Nice to see you. Thanks for being the first to comment. I'm glad you stopped by today- Alexis